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 Jun 9 2008, 01:56 PM
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 AKA RockIt Studios  Group: Official Member Posts: 2,286 Joined: Jun 2006 Member No: 421,809  |
inspired by David Cook's version of Innocent.
erm...it looks like crap, IMO.  I had big, major plans in the beginning, but I couldn't find an animated twirling person to make custom shapes out of, so i just changed my plan a little bit, and one thing led to another and I changed something else, then something else, and then another thing, and here's the result. >_< really amateur...i'm hating it, to be honest. :] don't know if i'll ever code it. opinions on how to improve, please! |
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Jun 9 2008, 02:01 PM
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It just looks like a big black square to me.
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Jun 9 2008, 02:15 PM
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 <(^_^<) DANCE!(>^_^)> Group: Official Member Posts: 1,304 Joined: Nov 2007 Member No: 586,621 |
the colors you used are too similar & make it extremely difficult to see the writing & brushes. maybe if you lightened everything up a bit?!
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Jun 9 2008, 02:20 PM
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AKA RockIt Studios Group: Official Member Posts: 2,286 Joined: Jun 2006 Member No: 421,809 |
the colors have a huge contrast on my screen. o_O.
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Jun 9 2008, 02:26 PM
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Senior Member Group: Member Posts: 292 Joined: Jul 2007 Member No: 545,047 |
I can't see anything on my screen =\
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Jun 9 2008, 02:37 PM
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<(^_^<) DANCE!(>^_^)> Group: Official Member Posts: 1,304 Joined: Nov 2007 Member No: 586,621 |
i barely see anything... if i squint & lean in close then i see a little something...
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Jun 9 2008, 02:37 PM
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AKA RockIt Studios Group: Official Member Posts: 2,286 Joined: Jun 2006 Member No: 421,809 |
huh. do you have older monitors or anything? 'cause my brightness is set to only 50% and it's plenty bright enough. >_<
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Jun 9 2008, 02:42 PM
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 What Up, Whats Hapening Group: Member Posts: 360 Joined: Aug 2007 Member No: 554,698 |
u need to brighten that up a lil bit all i see is black lol
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Jun 9 2008, 03:02 PM
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 [Insert something Witty Here] Group: Member Posts: 363 Joined: Dec 2007 Member No: 598,828 |
^ Try fixing the gamma whatever.. It looks fine to me. (except for the small print.)
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Jun 9 2008, 03:13 PM
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AKA RockIt Studios Group: Official Member Posts: 2,286 Joined: Jun 2006 Member No: 421,809 |
there, hopefully a bit better. brightened the blues a ton, changed the black to brown. :]
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Jun 9 2008, 05:42 PM
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I don't see anything... all I can see is black
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Jun 9 2008, 06:34 PM
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AKA RockIt Studios Group: Official Member Posts: 2,286 Joined: Jun 2006 Member No: 421,809 |
QUOTE(xoxo_proud @ Jun 9 2008, 05:42 PM)  I don't see anything... all I can see is black uhm, still...? i brightened and changed the colors quite a bit. 
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Jun 9 2008, 06:47 PM
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What Up, Whats Hapening Group: Member Posts: 360 Joined: Aug 2007 Member No: 554,698 |
ok now i see it clearly lol am on my ps3.
good job :D |
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Jun 9 2008, 06:51 PM
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 metalmouth hoee Group: Member Posts: 786 Joined: Aug 2007 Member No: 566,794 |
Even with my perfectly fine monitor, i still see darkness, when i lean in i see a bit better but it's still way too dark. The actual image looks a bit noise-y to me, but eh. my input
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Jun 9 2008, 07:02 PM
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AKA RockIt Studios Group: Official Member Posts: 2,286 Joined: Jun 2006 Member No: 421,809 |
...but i brightened it like you wouldn't even believe! there's no way it's going any brighter.
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Jun 9 2008, 07:42 PM
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 Senior Member Group: Head Staff Posts: 18,173 Joined: Mar 2005 Member No: 108,478 |
Maybe you should take a screenshot of what it looks like for you. For me, it looks like there's a lot of blue and black. I like the text on the bottom, and the placement of the ballerina.
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Jun 9 2008, 09:39 PM
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It's nice but still way too dark.
 I agree with Cristy. I like the placement of the ballerina, though. 
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Jun 9 2008, 09:57 PM
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AKA RockIt Studios Group: Official Member Posts: 2,286 Joined: Jun 2006 Member No: 421,809 |
hmm...i've never had brightness/contrast problems before. like i said, my brightness is only set to 50%, but maybe it's just that my screen is still oddly bright? i have no clue...
if this is the same at the original image, then that must be it. (screenshot) |
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Jun 9 2008, 10:38 PM
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 yo yo yiggidy yo. Group: Official Member Posts: 1,606 Joined: Mar 2005 Member No: 108,591 |
QUOTE(absinthe @ Jun 9 2008, 10:39 PM) It's nice but still way too dark. I agree with Cristy. I like the placement of the ballerina, though. okay it looks better now, lol. a lil. its still a bit dark tho. 
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Jun 9 2008, 11:28 PM
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 ٩(͡๏̯͡๏)۶ Group: Staff Alumni Posts: 14,309 Joined: Nov 2004 Member No: 65,593 |
A little too dark there dumbass.
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