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 Jun 26 2004, 03:01 AM
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 LunchboxXx  Group: Member Posts: 1,789 Joined: May 2004 Member No: 16,810  |
The most vile of fiends
Has just stolen my dreams Of euphoria! The sweet gone sour Has left me now Nefarious! On bending knees I send my screams Into night sky Where starlight gleams A memory Of ecstasy In paradise FOREVER LOST! Fortune, mute my pleas My begging for mercy From my endless misery Burgling my rhapsody The salt on where it bleeds From his infernal majesty From destruction of my glee Feeding my misanthropy Ring the funeral bell because my heart just fell An addition to failures hanging under my belt She held my heart in her hand but then he stole her’s from mine With the exposure of truth I feel my delight decline I’m not in love and lonely I’m alone and lovely Who am I trying to fool? Who am I trying to fool? Because I’m not falling for it one bit The coldest day in June The day that I lost you It seems I’m dead without redemption The beautiful sight of you’re delight The lust we loved all f**king night I sat with you, my love, and its retention The most filthy of cur Had to come and occur On my enchantment Heart clenched in teeth The theft set free Soul vermin Rape faith’s design Of hers and mine Molding our crossroads Into parallel lines So that I may find No rest As though I’m wicked BUT IT IS HE! Fortune, mute my pleas My begging for mercy From my endless misery Burgling my rhapsody The salt on where it bleeds From his infernal majesty From destruction of my glee Feeding my misanthropy As a cloud burst extinguish my burning desire My eyes burst of tears as the cutlass grow higher To sever the rope, my safety net of hope And a plummet or epic proportions to show me my fate Lacerate my scarlet strings Off with the heads of my fondest of dreams And it just goes to show nothing is as it seems I’m not in love and lonely I’m alone and lovely Who am I trying to fool? Who am I trying to fool? BECAUSE I’M NOT FALLING FOR IT ONE BIT! I’m a failure and it shines so definite Love on the ropes and joy in deficit I may be down but in the honest to god truth of it I refuse to concede, reject to forfeit! You will get what you deserve You f****** villain of the absurd You best beware, when you hurt her Prepare to befriend carrion worms it doesn't have a name yet, so feel free to make suggestions. i'll probably add more to it, too. |
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Jun 26 2004, 08:33 AM
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Ooh some strong stuff there.
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Jun 27 2004, 12:55 AM
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LunchboxXx Group: Member Posts: 1,789 Joined: May 2004 Member No: 16,810 |
i added more and changed it a bit. read it again of you already did.
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Jul 1 2004, 12:46 AM
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LunchboxXx Group: Member Posts: 1,789 Joined: May 2004 Member No: 16,810 |
READ MY SONG! i need to think of a name for it! help me out, here.
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Jul 1 2004, 01:01 AM
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Senior Member Group: Member Posts: 2,343 Joined: May 2004 Member No: 17,767 |
You're talented.
I envy people who can just think up the coolest and most meaningful lyrics all by themselves. I bet you'll become a famous song writer one day. |
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Jul 7 2004, 02:14 AM
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 i'm susan Group: Official Member Posts: 13,875 Joined: Feb 2004 Member No: 5,029 |
wow a 17 year old guy...ur good at this stuff... is ur dream to become a band singer? hope u accomplish ur goals! u're in my prayers now haha^^;;
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