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 May 27 2008, 09:46 AM
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 fell in love with a boy  Group: Member Posts: 523 Joined: May 2004 Member No: 16,965  |
from a much needed sleep,
and at the door, the whisper can he have your heart too? woke you. small feet planted at the base hands embraced the right of the frame, what should be shaking in the chill - her bones- were confident and still as she looked on until you woke, awaiting the answer the one meant for someone much stronger, almighty, a higher power. and each time, in the dead of the night you woke again long after she had already gone back to bed. but it was she who woke you the second time.. her prayer. her love for you, and the one she spoke of. and she is praying for your soul that one may take it instead. and she is praying for your health that you might live to care for her. and she is praying that you find that love, the love she already has but doesn't receive from you |
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May 27 2008, 09:49 AM
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 <(^_^<) DANCE!(>^_^)> Group: Official Member Posts: 1,304 Joined: Nov 2007 Member No: 586,621 |
aw. this is so sweet. you've got some skills! great job on this.
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May 27 2008, 11:32 AM
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Cute.
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May 27 2008, 12:35 PM
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 AKA RockIt Studios Group: Official Member Posts: 2,286 Joined: Jun 2006 Member No: 421,809 |
I really really really like this!
i'm not entirely sure why I do, but the emotion just kinda pops out, you know? great job. |
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May 27 2008, 01:35 PM
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Senior Member Group: Member Posts: 717 Joined: Mar 2008 Member No: 636,551 |
Very nicely written. Keep at it. :)
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