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 May 15 2008, 06:39 PM
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 That's what she said.  Group: Staff Alumni Posts: 3,559 Joined: Apr 2005 Member No: 130,200  |
May 12th 2008, in my class, no escape
Trying to reach, trying to find, baby you are so divine. Tell me now, do you see? You and I are meant to be. Hard to think, hard to breathe, when you got me on a leash. Even still, I'd never run, cause to me you're like the sun, Shining through a stormy day, love you more than words can say. Need your warmth, need your light, gives me strength so I can fight, Anything in this life, when we fight its like a knife, Plunging deep into my heart, hope we'll never drift apart, If we do, I think I'll die, be your catcher in the rye. Didn't get a chance to finish but its basically a rap I created when my Latin teacher was absent.  Tell me what you guys think.
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May 15 2008, 07:12 PM
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*Influential Guitarist & Inspiring Writer* Group: Official Member Posts: 1,217 Joined: Sep 2004 Member No: 51,134 |
damn jane I like this XD
flowss niccce, can I get some rice? it's 49,99, ooh girl you look so fine. shine so bright, like the sun, ooh i know you are the one. you should finish it, maybe ill hook up that guitar make a beat and you can rap it :D |
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May 16 2008, 03:52 PM
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That's what she said. Group: Staff Alumni Posts: 3,559 Joined: Apr 2005 Member No: 130,200 |
We should so tag team, muahaha. I can add my piano beats in the intro.
 QUOTE shine so bright, like the sun, ooh i know you are the one. Noiceeee. They learn so fast. -tear-
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May 21 2008, 06:40 PM
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 Tick tock, Bill Group: Administrator Posts: 8,764 Joined: Dec 2005 Member No: 333,948 |
Very cool, Jane. =)
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May 22 2008, 07:39 PM
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Jane! That is really good.
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May 27 2008, 07:32 PM
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That's what she said. Group: Staff Alumni Posts: 3,559 Joined: Apr 2005 Member No: 130,200 |
Thanks, guys.
 That means a lot. I appreciate the feedback. Haha.
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May 31 2008, 07:26 PM
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 tell me more. Group: Official Member Posts: 2,798 Joined: Jul 2004 Member No: 35,640 |
i really like it, tho i've never read the satcher in the rye.
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