to never be remembered to be forgotten, hm? Options

[RiddleMeWonders]

oh you,
who sit on the edge of the world
too frightened to face your peers
know they only want to protect you
as i have protected them -
as i have cared for them.
don't slide off,
it's the abyss you should be afraid of.
what dwell here are known to be:
the nutrients of your soul, your faith, your fears.
your life is only going to find purchase if you stay.
if you leap down,
you are but a whisper in a howling storm long passed
never remembered, never born, never suffered, never loved.
and i, who peer into the glass will forget you like them,
one erased etch, one smudge of ink on my palm, one life gone.
so if you truly wish to never be remembered to be forgotten
and to never be celebrated or feared or cursed
go down.
but know... that where we are is the last stand of those possibilities,
and the only one in your way... is you.

[superstitious]

That was such a lovely read. I like the rhythm that you set. It's simple enough to read, relaxing even but at the same time, there's a lot of emotion going on here.

"you are but a whisper in a howling storm long passed" - Beautiful line.

[aaayotiffany]

you are but a whisper in a howling storm long passed

i agree, that is an amazing line.

this was pleasant. you're a really good writer.

[RiddleMeWonders]

thanks guys. :)

[mizzkewl06]

very well written. i like how it flows. great job!