Starry Skies, stfu and read........................................... please :) |
 Apr 29 2008, 09:19 PM
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 kthxbai  Group: Official Designer Posts: 2,832 Joined: Feb 2008 Member No: 621,203  |
Starry Skies
The stars are eyes peering on the earth below. Watching children fall to sleep, watching street lamps illuminate bustling cities. When the sun rises, the eyes grow weary. Falling asleep, they disappear not to retun 'til night is near. The stars are eyes protecting their sleeping children protecting them from the dangers of night. - emberfly is sexy |
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Apr 29 2008, 09:21 PM
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 Let the romance soar Group: Member Posts: 17 Joined: Dec 2005 Member No: 315,977 |
I like. What rhyme scheme is it?
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Apr 30 2008, 04:33 PM
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kthxbai Group: Official Designer Posts: 2,832 Joined: Feb 2008 Member No: 621,203 |
Idk. I simple wrote it.
QUOTE(Steubie33 @ Apr 29 2008, 09:21 PM)  I like. What rhyme scheme is it? It was SUPPOSED to be freeverse, but since it rhymes in one place, I don't know what to tell you. |
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May 13 2008, 06:38 PM
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 Tick tock, Bill Group: Administrator Posts: 8,764 Joined: Dec 2005 Member No: 333,948 |
QUOTE(emberfly @ Apr 30 2008, 04:33 PM) Idk. I simple wrote it. It was SUPPOSED to be freeverse, but since it rhymes in one place, I don't know what to tell you. It's freeverse still. The instance of rhyming is incidental. ;) Nice use of imagery. =) "- emberfly is sexy" LOL XD |
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