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 Apr 20 2008, 01:24 PM
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 talent on another level  Group: Member Posts: 746 Joined: Oct 2006 Member No: 475,735  |
EDITED VERSION IS ON PAGE 2!
Yes, another experimental piece. I am still in my experimenting phase, so any type of advice for the future would help tremendously. Explain your dislikes please. Feedback is always appreciated!
Reason for edit: thumbed ;) -karmakiller
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Apr 20 2008, 02:14 PM
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 Senior Member Group: Staff Alumni Posts: 1,815 Joined: Jun 2006 Member No: 423,396 |
Wait, what do you mean by "don't be negative"?
It looks alright, though. |
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Apr 20 2008, 02:49 PM
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talent on another level Group: Member Posts: 746 Joined: Oct 2006 Member No: 475,735 |
yeah i mean don't say you don't like something, and not explain why.
well here is the original image:  is the black background a good thing, lol? |
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Apr 20 2008, 05:34 PM
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 Hey, I'm Mike Group: Staff Alumni Posts: 1,272 Joined: May 2006 Member No: 406,241 |
I really like it... especially the colors.
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Apr 20 2008, 05:40 PM
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 /人◕‿‿◕人\ Group: Official Member Posts: 8,283 Joined: Dec 2007 Member No: 602,927 |
Mike? I haven't seen any of your posts in forever!
Anyway, I think its a decent picture. The girl isn't exactly pretty though. She kinda looks like she might have been a guy at some point. In other words, you should have picked somebody like Keira Augustina. |
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Apr 20 2008, 06:23 PM
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talent on another level Group: Member Posts: 746 Joined: Oct 2006 Member No: 475,735 |
thanks for the feedback.
well XTC, have you heard of Cassie, the singer? if she was a man, she plays it off really well, lol. so basically your issue is that she looks like a transvestite, and that messes up your impression of my design? |
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Apr 20 2008, 06:44 PM
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 DDR \\ I'm Dee :) Group: Mentor Posts: 8,662 Joined: Mar 2006 Member No: 384,020 |
I like it. The only minor detail that catches my eye, though, is how there's more orange around her middle where her arms are and there's hardly any around the rest of her. Just looks a little off proportion wise. But I really like it.
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Apr 20 2008, 06:49 PM
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 drama is so intising i might just bite a mothaf**ka like tyson Group: Member Posts: 266 Joined: Mar 2008 Member No: 636,361 |
QUOTE(bigtrey90 @ Apr 20 2008, 07:23 PM)  thanks for the feedback. well XTC, have you heard of Cassie, the singer? if she was a man, she plays it off really well, lol. so basically your issue is that she looks like a transvestite, and that messes up your impression of my design?  but shes still cute. i heard of cassie, but yeah maybe the bg should be white? or patterned.. not sure. looks like something is missing or maybe add something to the black.. effects or some shit. good job. 
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Apr 20 2008, 06:55 PM
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/人◕‿‿◕人\ Group: Official Member Posts: 8,283 Joined: Dec 2007 Member No: 602,927 |
QUOTE(bigtrey90 @ Apr 20 2008, 06:23 PM) thanks for the feedback. well XTC, have you heard of Cassie, the singer? if she was a man, she plays it off really well, lol. so basically your issue is that she looks like a transvestite, and that messes up your impression of my design? No, the image as a whole is decent. Its just you didn't pick a good looking person lol. |
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Apr 20 2008, 06:55 PM
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 ٩(͡๏̯͡๏)۶ Group: Staff Alumni Posts: 14,309 Joined: Nov 2004 Member No: 65,593 |
This orasm is giving me an orgasm.
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Apr 20 2008, 06:58 PM
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drama is so intising i might just bite a mothaf**ka like tyson Group: Member Posts: 266 Joined: Mar 2008 Member No: 636,361 |
QUOTE(XTC @ Apr 20 2008, 07:55 PM) No, the image as a whole is decent. Its just you didn't pick a good looking person lol. ^ I think shes trying to be a model-ish. lol with a model pose, i mean you see Americas Next Top Model i mean the pictures they take sometimes make me think like "wtf are you wearin/lookin like that" but its a model thing i guess. lol No but shes really sexy/and pretty though. Jus look past that afro she got today. lol |
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Apr 20 2008, 07:03 PM
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٩(͡๏̯͡๏)۶ Group: Staff Alumni Posts: 14,309 Joined: Nov 2004 Member No: 65,593 |
QUOTE(XTC @ Apr 20 2008, 04:55 PM) No, the image as a whole is decent. Its just you didn't pick a good looking person lol. Wow, you either must be blind or you have the worst taste ever. Cassie is the definition of hot. She's half black, half asian. That's the best mix you can have. Maybe that picture doesn't show her real beauty.     
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Apr 20 2008, 07:35 PM
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 Senior Member Group: Member Posts: 83 Joined: Feb 2005 Member No: 97,525 |
beautiful! i love everything about it!
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Apr 20 2008, 07:49 PM
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talent on another level Group: Member Posts: 746 Joined: Oct 2006 Member No: 475,735 |
QUOTE(Tungster @ Apr 20 2008, 06:55 PM) This orasm is giving me an orgasm. funny how orasm came from the word "orgasm"! lmao thanks tweeti, really appreciate it!  thanks for all the positive feedback. |
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Apr 20 2008, 07:57 PM
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 yo yo yiggidy yo. Group: Official Member Posts: 1,606 Joined: Mar 2005 Member No: 108,591 |
oooooh, i like this. especially the colors.
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Apr 20 2008, 08:39 PM
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 Melieized Group: Official Designer Posts: 1,372 Joined: Nov 2006 Member No: 478,715 |
i really like the image. the only thing i noticed is that little motion blur that you got above her head. see if you can either remove that or try to put some type of like lighting effect there. other than that, great job!!!
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Apr 21 2008, 12:21 AM
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 Senior Member Group: Staff Alumni Posts: 3,645 Joined: Feb 2004 Member No: 4,975 |
QUOTE(Tungster @ Apr 20 2008, 04:55 PM) This orasm is giving me an orgasm. Damn, I need me one of those soon. |
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Apr 21 2008, 12:22 AM
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Senior Member Group: Staff Alumni Posts: 3,645 Joined: Feb 2004 Member No: 4,975 |
QUOTE(Tungster @ Apr 20 2008, 05:03 PM) Wow, you either must be blind or you have the worst taste ever. Cassie is the definition of hot. She's half black, half asian. That's the best mix you can have. Maybe that picture doesn't show her real beauty. wow she is very pretty |
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Apr 21 2008, 01:42 AM
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QUOTE(Melie @ Apr 20 2008, 06:39 PM) i really like the image. the only thing i noticed is that little motion blur that you got above her head. see if you can either remove that or try to put some type of like lighting effect there. other than that, great job!!! Couldn't agree more.I also feel like I need to see a little more of the "o" in "orasm". But that's probably just me. Not sure what the little men with umbrellas are for either. Other than that, I quite like it. 
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Apr 21 2008, 05:40 AM
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 Kissing for yesterday. Group: Official Designer Posts: 465 Joined: Sep 2007 Member No: 569,813 |
i really quitelike this, although i dislike the men with the umbrellas...they look a little out of place, or too simple for this. not sure
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Apr 21 2008, 05:47 AM
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 (′ ･ω･｀) Group: Official Designer Posts: 6,179 Joined: Dec 2004 Member No: 72,477 |
hmm
i like it. but the little men with umbrellas are annoying me excessively. by the way, why orasm? |
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Apr 21 2008, 05:58 AM
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talent on another level Group: Member Posts: 746 Joined: Oct 2006 Member No: 475,735 |
i like the little men, but i see what you mean by too simple for this piece.
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Apr 21 2008, 06:02 AM
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Kissing for yesterday. Group: Official Designer Posts: 465 Joined: Sep 2007 Member No: 569,813 |
QUOTE(bigtrey90 @ Apr 21 2008, 11:58 AM) i like the little men, but i see what you mean by too simple for this piece. even though you like them, i do not think they work so well due to the simplicity. you could always use them in another piece if you like them that much  or, tone them down a little so they arent so bright. |
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Apr 21 2008, 02:02 PM
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talent on another level Group: Member Posts: 746 Joined: Oct 2006 Member No: 475,735 |
QUOTE(doughnut @ Apr 21 2008, 06:47 AM) hmm i like it. but the little men with umbrellas are annoying me excessively. by the way, why orasm? idk i just liked it, lol. i am going to go back and fix some things, cause the swimsuit color kinda seems out of place to me. the little men MIGHT go, lol. thanks for all the feedback. |
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Apr 21 2008, 11:28 PM
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 Senior Member Group: Member Posts: 113 Joined: Sep 2005 Member No: 221,897 |
Cassie was a model with Wilhelmina and still does modelling. ;)
Cassie is part Mexican also. Her mother is Mexican and Black. I digress. I like it "Orasm", it's very colorful. |
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