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Smarmosaur
post Apr 18 2008, 08:20 PM
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obviously, i'm no pro, and it's not the greatest in the world, but i'm proud. this is my first vector, so constructive criticism would really be appreciated.
keep in mind i have no clue what's expected from a vector, let alone your first.
also, i've been trying to get my hands on a decent quality picture, so i could add more detail in the eyes/lips/hair. for now, i just worked with what i have.

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aaayotiffany
post Apr 18 2008, 08:23 PM
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not bad for your first try. i don't think its bad. at least the vector looks somewhat like the original. i probably wouldn't have the patience to vector. _smile.gif that area around his neck came out really dark though, almost too dark; as well as a lot of dark spots on his jacket.
 
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post Apr 18 2008, 09:54 PM
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thanksss! I know about the dark colors, I wanted a really drastic change between certain areas, to create depth.
 
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post Apr 18 2008, 11:49 PM
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the shading and layering looks pretty good, but next time you should definitely choose a much bigger picture that doesn't have a somewhat blurry quality. it's kind of hard to critique it since it's kind of small.
 
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post Apr 18 2008, 11:57 PM
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QUOTE(Teesa @ Apr 19 2008, 12:49 AM) *
the shading and layering looks pretty good, but next time you should definitely choose a much bigger picture that doesn't have a somewhat blurry quality. it's kind of hard to critique it since it's kind of small.

teesa's right.

i think the best pictures to vector are the ones that are big, of course, but simple. like if there's too much going on in a photo, it'll make it harder and you have to make sure there isn't too many shadows like the one you used.
 
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post Apr 19 2008, 01:15 AM
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Not bad for a first. If you're going for a smooth style, don't follow the posterization too much, since that usually results in lumpy shapes with extra, unnecessary curves. But yeah, work with a larger picture, especially since you're just starting out.
 
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post Apr 19 2008, 10:22 AM
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the image was a screenshot from an interview with MTV, hence the poor quality and small size. :]
 

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