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Mar 29 2008, 03:53 AM
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![]() (′ ・ω・`) ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Official Designer Posts: 6,179 Joined: Dec 2004 Member No: 72,477 |
its a vexel. and it looks awkward.
i've never done better so i can say this is my best work excuse me for the background, i rushed it. there is a full view here and it looks much better. ![]() hmm. about 300+ layers. i've unchecked some and i havent counted. i've been on and off of this and im just glad to get it finish before it rots. mods: i know i have this somewhere D: but pleasepleaseplease, its a month old and i dont wanna bump it just to review how badly i've done. bear with me please? |
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Mar 29 2008, 11:53 AM
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![]() i ish a duckie. :D ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Member Posts: 36 Joined: Sep 2006 Member No: 468,130 |
Wow, those look awesome! :thumpsup:
The shadow on the left cherry kinda bothers me, though... it doesn't look right. |
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Mar 29 2008, 11:57 AM
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![]() Melieized ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Official Designer Posts: 1,372 Joined: Nov 2006 Member No: 478,715 |
this looks outstanding!!!
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Mar 29 2008, 12:00 PM
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![]() Hablamos Español. ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Official Member Posts: 1,283 Joined: Jul 2007 Member No: 549,364 |
Oh mee god! it's booty-ful.
but shit i clicked the full version and im on comcast internet and it took a whole 30 seconds to load! it's big. |
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Mar 29 2008, 12:46 PM
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![]() Resource Center Tyrant ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Official Member Posts: 2,263 Joined: Nov 2007 Member No: 593,306 |
It's pretty good. I can't really assess your skill if I've seen nothing else from you. However, it looks pretty 2D. I think you were going for as realistic as you can, so doing more shadows to give the cherries depth would have made this better.
The dark shadow bothers me, as well. It's sharp, and it would be better being blended in more. The other thing that bothers me is that the cherry in the front has blurred outer lines. There's no real clear end to the cherry, and it throws me off. The shadows you have now are decent, but the cherry in the background looks as if it has a bruise. You know, like it's been injured, and now it has a blood clot. I would soften and perhaps expand that red part. I would even choose a lighter color. You did well with the cherry in front; more work should be done in the background cherry. |
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Mar 29 2008, 02:22 PM
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![]() Senior Member ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Staff Alumni Posts: 1,815 Joined: Jun 2006 Member No: 423,396 |
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Mar 29 2008, 02:41 PM
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![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Staff Alumni Posts: 7,156 Joined: Feb 2005 Member No: 95,404 |
I thought the cherries look delicious. But then I read MissHygienic's post... blood clot? Gahh..
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Mar 29 2008, 03:57 PM
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![]() Senior Member ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Member Posts: 786 Joined: Dec 2006 Member No: 488,341 |
I want to eat it.
It's way better than what I can do...which is nothing >.> I don't do vexels lol. Good job :) |
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Mar 29 2008, 04:41 PM
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![]() DDR \\ I'm Dee :) ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Mentor Posts: 8,662 Joined: Mar 2006 Member No: 384,020 |
I think it's wonderful. Kudos on the details.
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Mar 30 2008, 02:42 PM
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![]() Senior Member ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Member Posts: 113 Joined: Sep 2005 Member No: 221,897 |
I think it's beautiful. How long did it take? At one time I wanted to attempt one than I saw a 200 step tutorial and went screaming for the hills.
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Mar 30 2008, 02:54 PM
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![]() Senior Member ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Head Staff Posts: 18,173 Joined: Mar 2005 Member No: 108,478 |
I think this is great for your first try, and I don't think the first cherry's shadow looks that weird. It would look more natural if you fixed it, though. And like Whitney said, define the second cherry's outline more. Then it will be perfect. :D
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Apr 1 2008, 01:35 AM
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![]() What the fack. ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Official Member Posts: 6,164 Joined: Mar 2004 Member No: 8,519 |
I love seeing how much progress you've made with this picture. Nicely done.
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Apr 1 2008, 01:43 AM
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![]() sang loves hayden. ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Staff Alumni Posts: 3,373 Joined: Feb 2004 Member No: 5,687 |
It's extremely amazing!
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Apr 1 2008, 05:18 AM
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![]() (′ ・ω・`) ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Official Designer Posts: 6,179 Joined: Dec 2004 Member No: 72,477 |
It's pretty good. I can't really assess your skill if I've seen nothing else from you. However, it looks pretty 2D. I think you were going for as realistic as you can, so doing more shadows to give the cherries depth would have made this better. The dark shadow bothers me, as well. It's sharp, and it would be better being blended in more. The other thing that bothers me is that the cherry in the front has blurred outer lines. There's no real clear end to the cherry, and it throws me off. The shadows you have now are decent, but the cherry in the background looks as if it has a bruise. You know, like it's been injured, and now it has a blood clot. I would soften and perhaps expand that red part. I would even choose a lighter color. You did well with the cherry in front; more work should be done in the background cherry. thanks for the advices, they're extremely helpful. |
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Apr 1 2008, 07:00 PM
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![]() define our lives for us. ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Staff Alumni Posts: 11,656 Joined: Aug 2004 Member No: 43,293 |
i like it. haha, it looks time-consuming. i think the water drip.. things lol look really nice :)
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Apr 1 2008, 07:04 PM
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![]() <joke> inside </joke> ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Official Member Posts: 2,283 Joined: Oct 2006 Member No: 470,590 |
this is great
i remember your last one i agree with everyone about the shadow in the left. but it really is awesome. post the original! |
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Apr 4 2008, 09:42 PM
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![]() kthxbai ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Official Designer Posts: 2,832 Joined: Feb 2008 Member No: 621,203 |
I should you should have done RED cherries with PINK highlight instead of your pink cherries with red highlight.
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