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[monstrum]

I made this for Sanjee/the-vampires-song. Nothing special, but something about it dissatisfies me (maybe the textures), so comments and opinions are welcome. Don't bruise me too badly though : ( - my skills aren't very great.

EDITED: click HERE to see the revised version. Let me know how this one is : ). And to specify before I'm bombarded, I soften all the sharpened parts of the images, especially the right side (thanks to everyone's advice) and I brought down the opacity on the eyes.



This post has been edited by asphyxiated: Mar 23 2008, 09:58 PM

[freeflow]

I'm thinking it's the textures too, something oddly looks really weird about it to me. I think it's more of the right side. And then the areas where the color come on seem a tiny bit odd too. I hate to use the word "odd" and not get into more detail , but not sure how to describe it. Maybe less texture and more of the images you're using? Something else to go on the right hand side? Not sure but the text and colors are ok IMO.

[vintage-toile]

its the eyes in the top right corner. they need to have a lower opacity.
the orange and pinkish colours aren't really working too well so tone them down too? or try a different colour?
its really nice though, just a little patchy.

[none345678]

yeah the eyes stick out too much. it really nice though i like the colors other then the colors of the eyes

[vintage-toile]

i'd love to see this once it's been remodelled. because its definitely got great potential.

[karmakiller]

I don't really like the bottom right side. Maybe it just contrasts too much? I think if you made the eye part black and white too that it would blend better.

[monstrum]

Well, um- the eye part was the only part of the original image I didn't change and its suppose to be that color...

I'll make the adjustments though since that seems to be the main issue : ), thanks though.

[1angel3]

Try coding it first. It may all come together then. I don't nothing wrong with it.

[emberfly]

I don't know what it's supposed to be, so I can't give any thaughts on it.

[monstrum]

I don't know what it's supposed to be, so I can't give any thaughts on it.

I said, layout- but if you don't know what it's suppose to be for, it's not necessary for you to comment.

[1angel3]

It looks good either way if you ask me.

[monstrum]

It looks good either way if you ask me.

Thank you : ). You completely boosted my love ego and I heart you for it. Haha.