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 Mar 20 2008, 08:26 PM
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 paperthin pride.  Group: Member Posts: 76 Joined: Mar 2008 Member No: 626,463  |
so i was bored today and i decided to make a layout for one of my friends. i thought i was nice and she suggested that i submit this to cb. but i think i should have expert critique from the awesome and opinionated cb'ers!
so what do you guys think? what should i add, remove or change. thanks! |
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Mar 20 2008, 08:26 PM
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 ٩(͡๏̯͡๏)۶ Group: Staff Alumni Posts: 14,309 Joined: Nov 2004 Member No: 65,593 |
links dont work mang
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Mar 20 2008, 08:28 PM
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paperthin pride. Group: Member Posts: 76 Joined: Mar 2008 Member No: 626,463 |
oops!
 sorry. |
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Mar 20 2008, 09:03 PM
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 kthxbai Group: Official Designer Posts: 2,832 Joined: Feb 2008 Member No: 621,203 |
I don't like the big black letters and the brackets.
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Mar 20 2008, 09:09 PM
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 Senior Member Group: Official Member Posts: 1,529 Joined: May 2007 Member No: 523,843 |
KYO
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Mar 20 2008, 09:35 PM
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 define our lives for us. Group: Staff Alumni Posts: 11,656 Joined: Aug 2004 Member No: 43,293 |
ohmygahh fruits baskettt x]]
aha, to be honest, i love everything, except the image of kyo&tohru are too soft and elegant compared to the textures in the background. well, mainly the one on the left, because it's noticeably vibrant and crispy, compared to the really soft picture. you know? haha. i love everything else though. :D very cute |
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Mar 22 2008, 01:16 AM
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 XOTY*06 :D Group: Member Posts: 2,635 Joined: Mar 2004 Member No: 6,747 |
"Myo and Tohru" ZOMG! Who is Myo? I'm that behind that Tohru is already paired up with a new guy?! That's what I was thinking when I read the thread title lol. I really need to finish the series T_T
Wow, great work! The graphic, flow, and colors really go well together! If i'd change anything maybe the font for "Kyo + Tohru" to script or something. But good job! |
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Mar 22 2008, 01:18 AM
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 Cornflakes :D Group: Staff Alumni Posts: 4,541 Joined: Dec 2005 Member No: 322,923 |
Very nice, I like the colors and all. The only thing that irks me is the headers on the right side, they just seem to stick out to much instead of blending in with the layout. Maybe change them to like display:block;
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Mar 22 2008, 03:09 AM
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kthxbai Group: Official Designer Posts: 2,832 Joined: Feb 2008 Member No: 621,203 |
I don't like the right side modules being white.. can you make the blue to blend with the blog?
EDIT holy moly that alitteration sounded so cool XD. |
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Mar 22 2008, 03:14 PM
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paperthin pride. Group: Member Posts: 76 Joined: Mar 2008 Member No: 626,463 |
twilightsamurai - yeah it looks awkward to me now. LOL. any suggestions to how i should fix it.
 smrkangl - script-y font, like jane austen? i dont want to use scriptina since its too overused. insurmountable - yeah, i can move the whole side alittle closer to the left so that it will be part of it rather than separate.  emberfly - im not sure what you mean by the blog. thanks guys & girls! your c & c are appreciated im gonna go fix it, now. 
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Mar 22 2008, 03:20 PM
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kthxbai Group: Official Designer Posts: 2,832 Joined: Feb 2008 Member No: 621,203 |
the blue section to the left of the right side modules. the "about me" and below.
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Mar 22 2008, 06:56 PM
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paperthin pride. Group: Member Posts: 76 Joined: Mar 2008 Member No: 626,463 |
i just realized that i put "myo" instead of "kyo" can a mod change that please.
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Mar 22 2008, 07:41 PM
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paperthin pride. Group: Member Posts: 76 Joined: Mar 2008 Member No: 626,463 |
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