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 Feb 18 2008, 05:17 PM
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 whtever  Group: Member Posts: 150 Joined: Dec 2007 Member No: 603,643  |
ok. so my teacher says that in our essays we are not allowed to use this, that, these, those, which or is.
There's one sentence I have that i don't know how to reword to take "which" out. any suggestions? here's the sentence The supernatural elements in macbeth alter Macbeth's mental state to the point of instability which has him craving for power and his turing into a traitor. |
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Feb 18 2008, 06:19 PM
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 cake or DEATH Group: Staff Alumni Posts: 631 Joined: Sep 2005 Member No: 223,586 |
"The supernatural elements in Macbeth alter Macbeth's mental state to the point of instability, resulting in his lust for power and turn to treachery."
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Feb 18 2008, 06:33 PM
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 Thread Killer Group: Staff Alumni Posts: 1,012 Joined: Jun 2007 Member No: 530,544 |
The supernatural elements in Macbeth alter Macbeth's mental state to the point of instability, thus turning Macbeth into a traitor craving for power.
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Feb 18 2008, 07:53 PM
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whtever Group: Member Posts: 150 Joined: Dec 2007 Member No: 603,643 |
thanks (:
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