short poems, casual trains of thought |
 Nov 30 2007, 03:38 AM
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 your sweetest sin.  Group: Member Posts: 416 Joined: May 2004 Member No: 18,960  |
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don't watch me I catch you you know? I glance up and see your gaze upon me but then you, startled, look away like I'm some kind of mistake. 2: you know it's not love when he's got hot hands but cold kisses 3: give me a love-induced high something that won't last or maybe for one night an hour, a minute, a split second. throw in, perhaps, a dash of tenderness clasped, hidden hands soft, whispered kisses and eyes brimming with a hungry ecstacy -but don't let it last! I want you to give me goodbyes farewells, no strings at all because otherwise, i'm due for heartbreak. |
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Nov 30 2007, 10:50 AM
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I love these. I can really imagine studying these in class!
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Dec 1 2007, 02:26 PM
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 That's what she said. Group: Staff Alumni Posts: 3,559 Joined: Apr 2005 Member No: 130,200 |
Wow. The second one sounds like one of those Confucius says kinda things. I have to agree, my teacher would probably have us study these kind of poems.
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Jan 23 2008, 01:50 AM
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Eternal Syn Group: Member Posts: 398 Joined: Jun 2004 Member No: 24,000 |
you are a fantastic writer. don't stop.
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