Divine Love |
 Oct 1 2007, 12:55 AM
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Eternal Syn  Group: Member Posts: 398 Joined: Jun 2004 Member No: 24,000  |
Love; a feeling so divine
It’s hard to define But when found It’s like a diamond; completely profound It is a state of undeniable happiness Where two coalesce There is no need to hide it Like a burst of light; Let it emit Never let an opportunity pass you by Because a love like this Is simple bliss Hold fast; so it may never go awry |
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Oct 1 2007, 03:39 AM
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 this poem is great did u make it up or what mazin |
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Oct 1 2007, 05:26 PM
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Eternal Syn Group: Member Posts: 398 Joined: Jun 2004 Member No: 24,000 |
Thanks :D and yeah, I made it.
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Oct 1 2007, 05:36 PM
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This poem is simply amazing.
You did a great job. |
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Oct 1 2007, 06:43 PM
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Eternal Syn Group: Member Posts: 398 Joined: Jun 2004 Member No: 24,000 |
Lol thanks. At least people think it's good.
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