And The Music Plays On, Even When No One's Listening |
 Sep 9 2007, 02:45 PM
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Project for my art class. We had to draw a close-up of an instrument still life using the cross-contour line technique. It made me so dizzy xD Done in Sharpies which gave me a nice headache. Took a week & a half. Please ignore how skewed the edges are, it was too big to fit in our scanner so I had to photograph it. -.-;
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| *karmakiller* |
Sep 9 2007, 03:37 PM
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That looks really cool, I like the left side better than the right. It reminds me of something we had to make in Middle School using sharpies and all those lines.
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| *davinci* |
Sep 9 2007, 03:52 PM
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Wow, this looks very cool! Not sure if you're looking for critique but I noticed that the bridge is a little lopsided and the F-hole is a little small. Anyway, have to give this a thumbs up.
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| *Michelle* |
Sep 9 2007, 05:15 PM
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wow! I love it! I wish you had done more detail/ smaller lines with the background so that the instruments would pop-out more.
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Sep 9 2007, 05:42 PM
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Thanks! And thank you for the helful critique :]
QUOTE the bridge is a little lopsided and the F-hole is a little small. Yeah, I realized that thing was off once it was too late :[ What's the F-hole? Bah, I know nothing about instruments xD QUOTE I wish you had done more detail/ smaller lines with the background so that the instruments would pop-out more. I was actually thinking about doing that. The instruments do pop out a little more in real life though, some of it's just from bad contrast in the photograph. But I think I might still add a bit more detail in the background. |
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| *davinci* |
Sep 9 2007, 05:57 PM
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QUOTE(JustAnotherTeenageLoser @ Sep 9 2007, 06:42 PM)  Yeah, I realized that thing was off once it was too late :[ What's the F-hole? Bah, I know nothing about instruments xD The squiggly thing next to the bridge. XD
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Sep 9 2007, 06:41 PM
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QUOTE The squiggly thing next to the bridge. XD OHHHH...Okay thanks xD ha. Crap, that is smaller than I had intended...I meant to enlarge it while it was still a pencil sketch, must've forgotten...too late now :[ |
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Sep 9 2007, 06:48 PM
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 Look Up. Group: Member Posts: 447 Joined: Dec 2004 Member No: 73,230 |
Nice background pattern. I usually get lazy and I don't complete the background. I have issues with completing art projects. I'll be like 90% done and i won't want to finish the 10% so yeah.
Nice 
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Sep 15 2007, 10:49 PM
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Wow, that's cool
I thought it was the back of a Zebra at first  I like how it really pops out at you - although if maybe the background was a little less dominating and blending with instruments it might pop out a bit more, as someone else mentioned I think. Either way though, good job
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