Moving on, poem |
Moving on, poem |
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![]() Senior Member ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Member Posts: 816 Joined: Jun 2007 Member No: 531,188 ![]() |
EVERY boy catches my eye
Looks me up and down Smiles when they figure out I was abandoned Funny just to keep me sane Giggling sex and pulsing heart Worlds apart from where I'd thought I'd be Just you and me Hot chocolate I was never good at math Never could minus yesteryear It was so easy for you Your equations practical and lined in red Your textbook end left me confused Your lying lips left me soothed Your handsome face overshadowed All my doubts Newer, longer, harder Silent. All the love in the world Wasted. |
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Everyone out there doesn't know you
What people know is just skin deep Oh but life is full of experience So why leave your head down? There is no such thing as a wasted love Just a few unpleasant pictures There alot of love that others need So why not look around and care for a moment? Because you are human You are life You can love Beautiful P.S. sorry i just felt like replying to your little poem with a little one of mine XD I liked it :) and I felt such a nice piece of writing deserves a half arsed attempt of a poetic reply XD |
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Senior Member ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Member Posts: 42 Joined: Jun 2007 Member No: 538,136 ![]() |
love
what a complicated word i love you three complicated words the most used three words i know yet they have such different meanings to my girlfriend they are words of comfort to my family it is infrequently said but mean alot to my friends they mean that i will always be there to my foe they have no meaning at all where does the complications of love end?? when will the world collapse in on its self-hatred? the answer? when there is no true love left in the world! xx Ps. ur poem was very ncie and a gd reality check of how love is! and i dnt fink mine comes close 2 as urs but its always nice 2 try and send a thing bk |
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