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 Apr 5 2007, 04:01 PM
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So for my final advertising project we have to create logo and matching website for a company showcasing our own product. I decided to do handmade jewelry. Don't ask why I chose lemon ice designs, I honestly have no idea.
 But I like it. Anyway, I need some critique on the logo. (the actual verson is much better quality) Please remember to thumbnail large images. } Azarel This post has been edited by Azarel: Apr 5 2007, 07:01 PM |
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Apr 5 2007, 04:39 PM
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 i lost weight with Mulder! Group: Official Designer Posts: 4,070 Joined: Jan 2005 Member No: 79,019 |
i like the colors. they complement each other really well.
I would suggest spacing out the "lemon ice" letters more, or changing the font. for some reason, it just doesnt...fit with the rest of the text. or, maybe thats just me. but otherwise, very nice. |
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Apr 5 2007, 04:53 PM
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 yan lin♥ Group: Staff Alumni Posts: 14,129 Joined: Apr 2004 Member No: 13,627 |
^ I agree on the font, but I think that the color for the word 'designs' should be slightly darker.
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Apr 5 2007, 05:02 PM
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Senior Member Group: Staff Alumni Posts: 7,025 Joined: Feb 2004 Member No: 4,051 |
I agree with the designs being too skinny, so it's much thicker now.
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Apr 5 2007, 05:56 PM
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reminds me of the limewire logo :|
eh |
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Apr 6 2007, 10:21 AM
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Looks good, nice name and lemon :D
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Apr 6 2007, 06:28 PM
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mood: content Group: Member Posts: 2,063 Joined: Aug 2004 Member No: 42,325 |
i like it how it is. i can't think of anything to make it better.
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Apr 11 2007, 06:47 PM
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 insanitys contagious. Group: Official Member Posts: 4,210 Joined: Feb 2005 Member No: 99,707 |
I think a different font will do better by the design , the placement for me would look better more to the left. I think the name is kinda weird for jewelery but maybe something associated with jewelery should be included although the grey font makes it hard to see if it says jewelery there at all,
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Apr 23 2007, 02:33 AM
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Member Group: Member Posts: 12 Joined: Apr 2007 Member No: 514,954 |
Your idea is good, but I have to agree with the others: change your font and make its color darker.
Advertisement removed. } Azarel This post has been edited by Azarel: May 16 2007, 05:40 AM |
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May 1 2007, 04:42 PM
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 speechless Group: Member Posts: 869 Joined: Jul 2005 Member No: 163,564 |
I actually really like it Jackie. Its cute, for a lemon.
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May 16 2007, 04:05 AM
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Member Group: Member Posts: 12 Joined: Apr 2007 Member No: 514,954 |
Your idea is good, but I have to agree with the others: change your font and make its color darker.
Advertisement removed. } Azarel This post has been edited by Azarel: May 16 2007, 05:39 AM |
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May 17 2007, 04:52 PM
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 Two can keep a secret if one of them is dead. Group: Staff Alumni Posts: 2,682 Joined: Jun 2005 Member No: 156,187 |
lemon looks nice although it remind me more of a orange
the font looks nice on LEMON ICE but designs... not soo much no idea what font can be used the colors can be changed a bit but no idea what sorry this isn't much of help |
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May 17 2007, 10:58 PM
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 High Voltage!∞ Group: Official Member Posts: 4,728 Joined: Jul 2004 Member No: 29,157 |
I like it, it's really cute!
I agree with the whole font ordeal, though.  [Sorry to sound repetitive?]I really like the name Lemon Ice for jewelry, it's unique.  But designs should stand out more. I was thinking kind of like a cursive font that's not hard to read. And the color for designs should be different, again so it stands out.  Hope this helped.
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