ive done something terrible today! |
 Mar 15 2007, 09:27 AM
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here's a little something i wrote to ease the pain. forgive me, im not really a writer. =(
--- What have I done Oh what have I done? I tore my heart into two Now all I can do it watch Watch it bleed Watch it bleed May my blood cleanse me And free me from this nothingness |
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Mar 15 2007, 01:57 PM
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 Will write poetry for sex! Group: Member Posts: 1,110 Joined: Jan 2004 Member No: 600 |
Not bad.
I've seen a lot worse coming from some that actually do write frequently. Short, gets right to it, and I'm sure a lot of people can understand and/or empathize exactly what it is you're expressing in this poem. |
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| *stephinika* |
Mar 15 2007, 10:00 PM
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^^
Agreed. It's simple and easy to relate to and understand. I like it. 
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| *Kathleen* |
Mar 19 2007, 09:00 PM
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Awww. *Hugs Jusun*
 It's good, though.
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