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*mona lisa*
post Feb 16 2007, 12:08 AM
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http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/48891796/

PLEASE be harsh. I need criticism.
 
 
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post Feb 16 2007, 12:20 AM
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I want to apologize before I say what I am about to say.
So, I' sorry, Mona.

*sigh* With that said, I would like to say that I stared at it for about 5 minutes, and couldn't find anything to complain about. Really. I like it a lot.
Everything looks wonderful. thumbsup.gif I know you wanted criticism, but... oh well. laugh.gif
 
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post Feb 16 2007, 01:37 AM
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I think it could do without the smaller clover thingies (idk what they are called exactly, eheh)
it's a really nice background though! :)
I think it'd make a nice background even without the flower brushes thumbsup.gif
 
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post Feb 16 2007, 10:54 AM
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I don't what to say, Mona... I don't have a criticism. shrug.gif It's simple and very pretty. :)

Sorry. laugh.gif
 
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post Feb 16 2007, 12:26 PM
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hm , i dont like the white much , real simple.<the clover things are also out of place, like it doesnt match. and its just real simple but OK
 
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post Feb 16 2007, 12:32 PM
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I don't really feel like the clover things match the flow of it, but other than that, it's beautiful!

It's really not bad WITH the clover things.
 
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post Feb 16 2007, 05:30 PM
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Mona don't hate meeeeee, I LOvE THIS, omg. Mona.
 
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post Feb 16 2007, 11:20 PM
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The white doo-dads at the bottom should flow with the curvature of the other..things. But other than that...THIS IS HOT!
 
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post Feb 17 2007, 12:27 AM
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it's really good. I like it a lot.
 
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post Feb 17 2007, 02:44 AM
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Lol, I guess this teaches me a lesson in minimalism. XD.gif

Thanks everyone for the comments and criticism. :D
 
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post Feb 17 2007, 07:13 PM
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mona, i loveee it! great job!
 
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post Feb 20 2007, 01:05 PM
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its vvery nice and simple..i like it =]
 
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post Feb 21 2007, 09:04 AM
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yay, I love giving critism (before I hurt your feelings, I'd like to say this is amazing Mona =) You really did achieve the minimalistic look)

Crop off the bottom of the picture so there is less red. The image should start where the red and white collide. Or, since its a wallpaper, move the image down so there is more white. right now, there is too much red at the bottom and it doesn't do much for me, and it'll follow the 'rule of thirds' better cropped. Is there anyway you can change all the flowers so they are like the black ones? I really like those :P Finally, I would remove both the clover thats to the right of the biggest one and the one b/w words of the title.

Did you do this all with the pen tool?! wow
 
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post Feb 22 2007, 11:40 PM
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yeah, how you do it?
 
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post Feb 22 2007, 11:42 PM
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QUOTE(mizz_americaz @ Feb 21 2007, 9:04 AM) *
yay, I love giving critism (before I hurt your feelings, I'd like to say this is amazing Mona =) You really did achieve the minimalistic look)

Crop off the bottom of the picture so there is less red. The image should start where the red and white collide. Or, since its a wallpaper, move the image down so there is more white. right now, there is too much red at the bottom and it doesn't do much for me, and it'll follow the 'rule of thirds' better cropped. Is there anyway you can change all the flowers so they are like the black ones? I really like those :P Finally, I would remove both the clover thats to the right of the biggest one and the one b/w words of the title.

Did you do this all with the pen tool?! wow
Haha, thanks so much! I'll keep the rule of thirds in mind. :)
QUOTE(moorepocket* @ Feb 22 2007, 11:40 PM) *
yeah, how you do it?
Used one brush and the rest was by using the pen tool. :P
 
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post Feb 23 2007, 03:25 PM
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Besides what Maryland said, the only thing that sticks out are edges of the black and the skinny white lines in the red. They are a little bit rough.

Other than that it's fantastic. You are amazing at simple elegance flowers.gif
 
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post Feb 24 2007, 12:06 AM
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Ew....








Mona wants harsh criticism, when simply I cannot give it to you. It's WONDERFUL, and simplistic.
 
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post Feb 24 2007, 11:33 AM
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Onyi eff. babii
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um its really beautiful nd i kno u want some criticism well here it is:

umm maybe the red part shouldnt b so big... lol i dont kno dats all i got
 
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post Feb 26 2007, 09:54 AM
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QUOTE(mona lisa @ Feb 22 2007, 11:42 PM) *
Haha, thanks so much! I'll keep the rule of thirds in mind. :) Used one brush and the rest was by using the pen tool. :P

wow, you have so much patient.
 
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post Feb 27 2007, 09:56 AM
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It so bad! tsk. tsk. sheesh. of course not. It's actually pretty nice! Honestly! No faults.
 

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