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| *mona lisa* |
 Feb 16 2007, 12:08 AM
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| *StanleyThePanda* |
Feb 16 2007, 12:20 AM
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I want to apologize before I say what I am about to say.
So, I' sorry, Mona. *sigh* With that said, I would like to say that I stared at it for about 5 minutes, and couldn't find anything to complain about. Really. I like it a lot. Everything looks wonderful.  I know you wanted criticism, but... oh well. 
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Feb 16 2007, 01:37 AM
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 Froggie! Woof woof. :D  Group: Member Posts: 1,423 Joined: Nov 2004 Member No: 66,146 |
I think it could do without the smaller clover thingies (idk what they are called exactly, eheh)
it's a really nice background though! :) I think it'd make a nice background even without the flower brushes
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| *Duchess of Dork* |
Feb 16 2007, 10:54 AM
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I don't what to say, Mona... I don't have a criticism.
 It's simple and very pretty. :)Sorry.
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Feb 16 2007, 12:26 PM
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 insanitys contagious. Group: Official Member Posts: 4,210 Joined: Feb 2005 Member No: 99,707 |
hm , i dont like the white much , real simple.<the clover things are also out of place, like it doesnt match. and its just real simple but OK
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Feb 16 2007, 12:32 PM
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Senior Member Group: Official Member Posts: 3,459 Joined: Dec 2005 Member No: 328,021 |
I don't really feel like the clover things match the flow of it, but other than that, it's beautiful!
It's really not bad WITH the clover things. |
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Feb 16 2007, 05:30 PM
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 Senior Member Group: Official Member Posts: 7,149 Joined: Aug 2005 Member No: 213,509 |
Mona don't hate meeeeee, I LOvE THIS, omg. Mona.
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Feb 16 2007, 11:20 PM
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 show me a garden thats bursting to life Group: Staff Alumni Posts: 12,303 Joined: Mar 2005 Member No: 115,987 |
The white doo-dads at the bottom should flow with the curvature of the other..things. But other than that...THIS IS HOT!
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Feb 17 2007, 12:27 AM
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 Death is a promise given to us at birth Group: Official Designer Posts: 4,757 Joined: Mar 2004 Member No: 7,459 |
it's really good. I like it a lot.
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| *mona lisa* |
Feb 17 2007, 02:44 AM
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Lol, I guess this teaches me a lesson in minimalism.
 Thanks everyone for the comments and criticism. :D |
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Feb 17 2007, 07:13 PM
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 i lost weight with Mulder! Group: Official Designer Posts: 4,070 Joined: Jan 2005 Member No: 79,019 |
mona, i loveee it! great job!
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Feb 20 2007, 01:05 PM
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 Senior Member Group: Member Posts: 1,584 Joined: Dec 2004 Member No: 70,748 |
its vvery nice and simple..i like it =]
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Feb 21 2007, 09:04 AM
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 I intend to live forever-so far, so good. Group: Member Posts: 2,820 Joined: Mar 2005 Member No: 115,137 |
yay, I love giving critism (before I hurt your feelings, I'd like to say this is amazing Mona =) You really did achieve the minimalistic look)
Crop off the bottom of the picture so there is less red. The image should start where the red and white collide. Or, since its a wallpaper, move the image down so there is more white. right now, there is too much red at the bottom and it doesn't do much for me, and it'll follow the 'rule of thirds' better cropped. Is there anyway you can change all the flowers so they are like the black ones? I really like those :P Finally, I would remove both the clover thats to the right of the biggest one and the one b/w words of the title. Did you do this all with the pen tool?! wow |
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Feb 22 2007, 11:40 PM
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Death is a promise given to us at birth Group: Official Designer Posts: 4,757 Joined: Mar 2004 Member No: 7,459 |
yeah, how you do it?
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| *mona lisa* |
Feb 22 2007, 11:42 PM
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QUOTE(mizz_americaz @ Feb 21 2007, 9:04 AM)  yay, I love giving critism (before I hurt your feelings, I'd like to say this is amazing Mona =) You really did achieve the minimalistic look) Haha, thanks so much! I'll keep the rule of thirds in mind. :) Crop off the bottom of the picture so there is less red. The image should start where the red and white collide. Or, since its a wallpaper, move the image down so there is more white. right now, there is too much red at the bottom and it doesn't do much for me, and it'll follow the 'rule of thirds' better cropped. Is there anyway you can change all the flowers so they are like the black ones? I really like those :P Finally, I would remove both the clover thats to the right of the biggest one and the one b/w words of the title. Did you do this all with the pen tool?! wow QUOTE(moorepocket* @ Feb 22 2007, 11:40 PM) yeah, how you do it? Used one brush and the rest was by using the pen tool. :P
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Feb 23 2007, 03:25 PM
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 Senior Member Group: Staff Alumni Posts: 7,025 Joined: Feb 2004 Member No: 4,051 |
Besides what Maryland said, the only thing that sticks out are edges of the black and the skinny white lines in the red. They are a little bit rough.
Other than that it's fantastic. You are amazing at simple elegance 
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Feb 24 2007, 12:06 AM
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 vengeance. Group: Official Member Posts: 3,058 Joined: Jul 2006 Member No: 437,024 |
Ew....
Mona wants harsh criticism, when simply I cannot give it to you. It's WONDERFUL, and simplistic. |
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Feb 24 2007, 11:33 AM
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 Onyi eff. babii Group: Member Posts: 529 Joined: Aug 2005 Member No: 204,660 |
um its really beautiful nd i kno u want some criticism well here it is:
umm maybe the red part shouldnt b so big... lol i dont kno dats all i got |
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Feb 26 2007, 09:54 AM
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Death is a promise given to us at birth Group: Official Designer Posts: 4,757 Joined: Mar 2004 Member No: 7,459 |
QUOTE(mona lisa @ Feb 22 2007, 11:42 PM) Haha, thanks so much! I'll keep the rule of thirds in mind. :) Used one brush and the rest was by using the pen tool. :P wow, you have so much patient. |
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Feb 27 2007, 09:56 AM
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 rissa. Group: Member Posts: 621 Joined: Jul 2006 Member No: 436,690 |
It so bad! tsk. tsk. sheesh. of course not. It's actually pretty nice! Honestly! No faults.
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