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Goodbye, to my ex
MrStrife
post Jan 31 2007, 12:19 PM
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Allz fair in love and war, at least thats what they say

But if therez a price on your heart, everybody pays

Aint nothin worse then telling someone I love you

Thats like giving them permission to go and hurt you

Shoulda seen the truth was right there in my face

But I was so blinded and caught up in the chase

Wasting all that time girl I thought you was worth it

Mind playing games shit I thought you was perfect

Now I aint gonna be the one thats gonna be missed

Shit I aint even gonna get at least one last kiss

Why does this life gotta act like a one time bitch?

Why is the best thing I can do is also the hardest?

Why right now our future set right there before us?

But fucc it, cuhz its time for me to stop being greedy

I'm always gonna be there for you if you need me

But I gotta live my own life right, Can you feel me?

The point you don't care cuhz my jealous stressin

I think about how you feel now I'm mostly guessin

So go find someone better thats gonna do you right

Cuhz truth is girl you never needed me in your life

And there aint shit else to say cuhz I'm saying goodbye

Sad thing is, you know the reasons if you wondering why
 
 
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Ekay
post Jan 31 2007, 07:43 PM
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sad. i like it :D only problem i had was the fact that it was spaced in between. but that's just me. otherwise hahaha, goodjob on the writing
 
ldyxluvable
post Feb 1 2007, 02:08 AM
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kool rhymes but its sad sad.gif
 
*jayen*
post Feb 2 2007, 09:55 PM
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This this brilliant; I liked it. _smile.gif
 
*Monochrome.*
post Feb 13 2007, 11:54 PM
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i like this alot. but the spaces in between made it really overwhelming on the eyes.
other than that the rhymes are really nice.
 
MrStrife
post Nov 11 2008, 10:12 PM
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goodbye.

because, for real, almost doesn't count.
 

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