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post Jan 16 2007, 12:13 AM
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post Jan 17 2007, 06:04 PM
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i really like the first one
and the scene in the second one is really pretty
& i really like how you made reflections in the water too
 
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post Jan 18 2007, 04:44 PM
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I like the composition on these. I think I like the first one better. The second one has a nice mood to it though.

Well done, overall. thumbsup.gif
 
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post Jan 18 2007, 05:33 PM
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OMG. HOW'D YOU MAKE THOSE, YOU HAVE LIK KLDFGJSDKLFJS TALENT! I'm so jealous, omg people look at this work, you are going to become famous because of your work. OMG.OOGMGOMG
 
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post Jan 19 2007, 03:27 PM
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The first one looks better, hands down. I like the second one the best though, because theres more to look at it and the mood towards it is very nice.
 
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post Jan 19 2007, 03:30 PM
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QUOTE(Jeng @ Jan 18 2007, 5:33 PM) *
OMG. HOW'D YOU MAKE THOSE, YOU HAVE LIK KLDFGJSDKLFJS TALENT!
OMG.OOGMGOMG

What she said laugh.gif

These are amazing. I love the first one, the detail, mood, everything! WOW
 
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post Jan 19 2007, 03:38 PM
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The first is much better, but I like them both... ;]
 
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post Jan 19 2007, 03:41 PM
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I'm not sure if it's the scan/picture but the first one should be a little sharper. Try to blend the reflection into the water a bit more on the second one.

Other than that they're beautiful. The mood is set very well.
 
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post Jan 19 2007, 08:02 PM
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post Jan 21 2007, 03:09 PM
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Wow, they are truly beautiful. Completely tranquil and serene indeed. throb.gif
 
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post Jan 24 2007, 06:17 PM
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Oooh. They are beautiful.

I like the first one more, but the second one would be better if you shade some more on the water.
 
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post Jan 25 2007, 01:34 PM
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i am quite jealous. i can't do oil paintings. i'm an ink pen person.
 
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post Feb 15 2007, 11:42 PM
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Wow, your really talented. happy.gif Second one is my favorite.
 
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post Feb 16 2007, 06:07 PM
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I think your pieces would be way better (not that they aren't already great) if you added more texture and sparkle to the water. Or maybe it's just me; I love to pile up the oil-paint when I'm doing water-scape things.
 
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post Feb 19 2007, 02:44 AM
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the first one should definately be in your portfolio. it tells a beautiful story.
 
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post Feb 20 2007, 06:03 PM
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UHM. WOW.

These are really amazing actually.
Def enter these into your portfolio.
IF you have to choose between the two, then choose the first one.
The composition is more interesting, and there seems to be more
of a story behind it. The color is amazing as well.

Gosh, ur talented girl.
 
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post Feb 20 2007, 09:32 PM
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Wow, I love these. I think they look great. thumbsup.gif I really like the flowers. XD.gif
 
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post Feb 22 2007, 02:44 PM
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I know I am kind of late but.... WOW. These are gorgeous. *envious of your talent* heh.
I really like them both, Amazing job. thumbsup.gif
 
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post Feb 22 2007, 08:13 PM
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this remind me of vietnam x] my sister used to wear those dress and made me wear them Lmao, never work -____-
oI love it <3
 
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post Feb 28 2007, 08:46 PM
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They are both awesome. I love the flowers and the detail.

In the first one, (and I think you know this already) the second person in white is a bit distorted. A technique is to paint the foreground and the lighter colors first, then paint the background and the darker colors.

The second one is my favorite out of the two, though I think it could be a little better. The reflection on the right side, reflecting the trees, the trunks should be slightly reflected as well.

Besides those things, it is a great piece. Call me when you sell it. I want it. _smile.gif
 
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post Feb 28 2007, 10:08 PM
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I really like them both. You did a wonderfull job. I love all the colors.

o_O
 
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post Mar 17 2007, 03:10 AM
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wow ur really good i love the second one.
 
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post Mar 17 2007, 10:16 AM
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i like the first one, but the refelection in the water on the 2nd one is amazing, both are lovely pieces
 

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