Sanctuary, back to poems |
 Jan 8 2007, 10:40 PM
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Eternal Syn  Group: Member Posts: 398 Joined: Jun 2004 Member No: 24,000  |
Live in the sanctuary that is your own
Call it what others don’t; Call it home Whether it’s under the azure sky Or in the city of Versailles Stay close to those that are symbolic Even if the reasons are cryptic So stay for those that care Even if the memory of them is barely there Live beneath the sunset sky And close your eyes To listen to the easy breeze… As you reside in your sanctuary |
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| *My Cinderella.* |
Jan 9 2007, 12:28 AM
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This is short and sweet. I would have very much enjoyed it to be longer though.
 Please continue to write, I look forward to reading them.
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Jan 9 2007, 03:31 AM
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Eternal Syn Group: Member Posts: 398 Joined: Jun 2004 Member No: 24,000 |
hahah thanks. i write on a daily basis. however, i don't post all of them up on cb. i would've liked it to be longer myself. i did have an extended version, but i just thought that killed it. so i edited it to that. thank you though
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| *My Cinderella.* |
Jan 9 2007, 09:50 AM
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I would very much to see some more of them. XD if you come across anymore, don't hesitate to post em.
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Jan 9 2007, 07:56 PM
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Eternal Syn Group: Member Posts: 398 Joined: Jun 2004 Member No: 24,000 |
haha ok, but if you're bored, there's 2 recent ones down there, labeled Misery and the other one's called Celestial
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Jan 9 2007, 08:29 PM
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Senior Member Group: Member Posts: 140 Joined: Jan 2007 Member No: 492,291 |
QUOTE Whether it’s under the azure sky Or in the Versailles my favorite lines! |
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Jan 9 2007, 08:47 PM
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Eternal Syn Group: Member Posts: 398 Joined: Jun 2004 Member No: 24,000 |
^^ yeah mine too :]
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Jan 20 2007, 11:05 PM
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 ALLISON Group: Official Designer Posts: 3,372 Joined: Nov 2005 Member No: 310,259 |
aww..i really really really like this
makes me feel..happy 
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Jan 21 2007, 06:20 PM
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Eternal Syn Group: Member Posts: 398 Joined: Jun 2004 Member No: 24,000 |
i'm glad that it makes you feel happy. too bad it doesn't have the same effect on me.
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