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shorty_d09
post Jan 7 2007, 08:56 PM
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how do you fell about it

 
 
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Kontroll
post Jan 7 2007, 09:31 PM
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There's too many girls on the page. Good blending though. I'm not a big fan of having a texture overlay. I think that technique is how you American's would say it...SH***Y haha. No, but it's pretty cool.

I know, that I do this sometimes, but try to change up some stuff. For instance, in your last submittion, you had the same font for the text. Try using different fonts. And also, try to get all the text on the picture. I hate that when things are cut off cause it looks bad on the desktop. Ya know what I mean. But it's pretty cool.
 
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post Jan 7 2007, 10:28 PM
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^I agree way over 100%.

The font doesn't exactly fit in my opinion though. To many pictures of the girl as well. I think the blending and stuff was done well though, and the color overlay looks better than the texture overlay. Scale to 1-10 I'll give it a 6/7. I think it looks nice.
 
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post Jan 8 2007, 10:24 AM
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Sometimes simplicity is best. I also highly dislike the typeface, mostly because it's way overused. Sometimes the typeface you use can make or break a piece so always put alot thought into that you use because a good typefaces purpose is to enhance the piece.
 
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post Jan 8 2007, 04:01 PM
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I agree wtih above replies, try sticking with 3/4 pictures.
Also try using a different font, something manuscript but different.
The blending is neat in my opinion, very well done.
Try using a different texture when maknig blends, and maybe set it to a differnt blending mode.
But nice job. Don't take my cristism hard. :D
 

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