Kelly Has A Secret, A Domestic Violence Perspective |
Kelly Has A Secret, A Domestic Violence Perspective |
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Eternal Syn ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Member Posts: 398 Joined: Jun 2004 Member No: 24,000 ![]() |
I like it. Very dark. You got nice multies in there.
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Thanks for the feedback.
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![]() ALLISON ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Official Designer Posts: 3,372 Joined: Nov 2005 Member No: 310,259 ![]() |
i like how it relates to real life
great job |
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![]() and they say imitation is flattering ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Member Posts: 1,337 Joined: Jul 2004 Member No: 27,269 ![]() |
I like how it really picks up the pace and gets more and more intense as it goes on. I can really hear it in my head, in a good way =]
The only problem I had was the substitution of 2 for "to" and 4 for "for" I dunno. It just kinda threw me off. Good work, though. |
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