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Kelly Has A Secret, A Domestic Violence Perspective
Misternobody
post Jan 6 2007, 01:43 PM
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Ekay
post Jan 6 2007, 06:02 PM
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I like it. Very dark. You got nice multies in there. thumbsup.gif
 
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post Jan 7 2007, 05:41 PM
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Thanks for the feedback.
 
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post Jan 20 2007, 11:03 PM
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i like how it relates to real life
great job
 
sporadic
post Jan 21 2007, 12:32 AM
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I like how it really picks up the pace and gets more and more intense as it goes on. I can really hear it in my head, in a good way =]

The only problem I had was the substitution of 2 for "to" and 4 for "for"

I dunno.

It just kinda threw me off.

Good work, though.
 
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post Jan 22 2007, 10:44 PM
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