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 Dec 29 2006, 01:58 PM
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 daughter of sin  Group: Member Posts: 1,653 Joined: Mar 2006 Member No: 386,134  |
Gray ideas dance into my mind once again,
for fate seems to not be on my side. Thoughts, too unrealistic, too feeble, too everything to become something. What am I? Intelligible? Maybe not. Despondent? Irreparable? Maybe. You used to know. Though life has its own conclusions. |
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Jan 6 2007, 01:33 PM
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I like this, i think you worded it just right and got your idea across in a nice way, i especially like the part where you were asking yourself the questions, great piece of writing.
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| *My Cinderella.* |
Jan 9 2007, 12:30 AM
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This is very deep. It is almost as if I could feel the emotion in this piece. You bring across the feeling with just a few lines--great job.
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