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flaymzofice
post Sep 29 2006, 04:00 PM
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This is a layout I made for a friend; she's started using it but this is the tester version (since I don't know that she'd want me advertising her myspace to complete strangers).

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As you can see from the 'About Me' box, this isn't completely finished. Trying to figure out how to wrap text around the image, whilst having it not cover the friends' images in the Comment Box if I were to externally link the left guy as a separate image. Comments/criticism welcome.
 
 
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post Sep 30 2006, 12:28 AM
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Its nice, graphically. The coding part still needs a little tweaking. The comment box just doesn't look right at all, I think you should change the width so the friend picture isn't on his hand. It made it look completely out of place in a way, perhaps get rid of the code that resizes the friends pictures so their not so small. Also the little friend marquee needs to come up a bit so its still in that box and not off and looking odd.

Honeslty I think it looks fine. Nicely done, are you going to contribute it or no? Just wondering of course. happy.gif
 
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post Sep 30 2006, 07:10 AM
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You need to improve blending. You should try go deeper to his body and feature it.
 
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post Sep 30 2006, 04:23 PM
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^What do you mean 'go deeper to his body and feature it'? As in...extract further inside the lines of his body and then feather...?

And Holly, thanks for your comments. I'm aware I'm not a code orientated layout maker (I just use Myspace as an excuse to abuse Photoshop!) so I know there are a few things I need help with. So thanks for your constructive criticism. As for contributing it...I don't think anyone would want it! But I'm flattered you would wonder.
 
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post Sep 30 2006, 08:53 PM
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Gez, he's so cute. I watched the season premiere last night. xD

The outline of him makes it look icky.

I think you should've used grey-ish colors and made it more professional looking rather than the grudge brushes.

It's not bad though. n___n
 
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post Oct 4 2006, 09:54 PM
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I like the background and abstract look, it looks really good. I like the creativity of the jagged edge look but it looks weird. Theres somehting that makes it look weird or something, like the drop shadow or the other white space around it, I dunno. You cutted him very nicely.

Other then that, it looks good.
 
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post Oct 4 2006, 10:01 PM
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^ Why'd you bump this?
This topic is for his old layout, his new layout has a topic here; http://www.createblog.com/forums/index.php?showtopic=154058

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