Just...A poem. |
 Aug 29 2006, 05:58 PM
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Nick-O-Matic.  Group: Member Posts: 16 Joined: Aug 2006 Member No: 458,496  |
I THINK this is the right place to post this, please do tell me if I'm wrong.
This is a poem I wrote for my ex when we were going out, I wouldn't say it's my best poem, my best ones are in a very big paper pad in my room, but it's prolly the best one I have on my pc. Her warm embrace and her smiling face. Her gentle touch and her tender kiss. I feel her fingers trace my lips. I feel my hands run down her hips. I hold her close as time stands still. This is love…A rushing thrill. A crystal drug, a lyrical wind. Within temptation, a gentle sin. We could fall to the sky. Or crawl from the sea. Whatever… So long as you’re with me. I love you. Yeah...Opinions greatly appreciated =]. |
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Aug 29 2006, 05:58 PM
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 show me a garden thats bursting to life Group: Staff Alumni Posts: 12,303 Joined: Mar 2005 Member No: 115,987 |
Hi. Interests >> Writing
Tons of writing there :) |
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Aug 29 2006, 05:59 PM
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 All The Girlies Say I'm Pretty Fly For A White Guy Group: Member Posts: 1,944 Joined: May 2006 Member No: 400,858 |
Yeah^
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Aug 29 2006, 05:59 PM
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Aw. That's cute. Anyways, this goes in the Writing forums
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Aug 29 2006, 06:02 PM
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 your signal fades away, and all I'm left with is noise. Group: Member Posts: 2,099 Joined: Apr 2004 Member No: 14,110 |
Awww..I love that poem. It's really good.
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