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if i were an orange, a poem
ryfitaDF
post May 29 2004, 02:21 AM
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if i were an orange i'd live in the leaves
and be picked from the tree
i'd be put in a basket
or is it my casket?
i would be consumed
it would be my doom
but my peel would still loom
on the floor of the room

me and my friend devin wrote that for english class. it just goes to show i can make even brightly colored citrus fruit morbid happy.gif
 
 
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angel-roh
post May 29 2004, 06:01 AM
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i heart oranges! and thats a cute poem! i give u a 9.9999/10
 
LatinaLady
post May 29 2004, 07:16 PM
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ha-ha =) i also posted a poem that i had to make in my engish clas.
 
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post May 29 2004, 07:18 PM
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QUOTE(ryfitaDF @ May 29 2004, 2:21 AM)
if i were an orange i'd live in the leaves
and be picked from the tree
i'd be put in a basket
or is it my casket?
i would be consumed
it would be my doom
but my peel would still loom
on the floor of the room

me and my friend devin wrote that for english class. it just goes to show i can make even brightly colored citrus fruit morbid happy.gif

wow that was sooo cool =D hehes wow that's a cool poem =D Man I can't find any words that rhyme. i ive a 10/10 You should SOOOO get that copyrighted and then sent in or something happy.gif
 

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