Model, real life [if poses] in any medium Options

[mrsnoll]

Hey you guys, here you can post any real life drawings/paintings you've done, but it just so happens I drew a model
...yes she's nude, but lemme explain the difference between NUDE and NAKED.
Nude is referring the beautiful human form that is posing in a relaxed position.
Naked on the other hand is an offensive pose done by a human form in an unrelaxed position.
I used the follwing mediums;
ebony layout pencil/graphite crayon/9B woodless graphite

http://i7.photobucket.com/albums/y255/The_...rummer/nude.jpg
so, whaddya think of it?

ps-please don't write something rude about the fact that she's unclothed ;nude poses are one of the best ways to studies the human anatomy

[mrsnoll]

aw thanks :]
I have areas I know need working and it's good have people be honest with me, cause my parents are always, "Jessica, that's so good" but I want someone to tell me if I need to work on this or that
thanks again

[emazing]

Talented! I love the shading, and although I'm definitely not an expert with drawing&such, the neck/jawline is sort of at an awkward position.

[febek]

i think the forehead need to be a little rounded,but it the model wasnt like that then w.e its pretty cool. and nice explanation about the diff bout nude, and naked :)

[KissMe2408]

The neck does need to be shortened a bit, and try to get the position correct.
However, this piece is really nice, kudos on the shading!

[colleen92]

it's pretty good :]] i think the proportion is a little off in the neck a little on the profile. i think her chin is too short or something. actually i think it's that her expression doesn't look nearly as relaxed as the rest of her. try softening up her features. but other than that it's great. the shading is really well done.

[*Uronacid*]

hmm... I like it, I think her breasts are a little large and her neck is odd, but I'm happy to see people drawing things like that in here... the human body is such a good inspiration

[*This Confession*]

Its very pretty, although the neck looks alittle funny. The face is pretty I think though.

[mrsnoll]

yay for feedback!
thanks a lot you guys

[sadolakced acid]

there's some sizing issues.

yes, the shading is good and all, but the issues with makign everything the correct size should be corrected first.

sizing issues, the neck is a bit big, and the head a bit too small, expecially in the jaw area.

after you get the sizing right, then work on the shading.

[Simba]

I agree with what people have been saying about the neck.

It's still quite nice overall though.

[*Kathleen*]

Aside from the neck (as aforementioned) and the weird-ish hairline , it looks awesome. You should post up more of your artwork!

[bijoue]

like everyone else said: she looks like a giraffe.

[ParanoidAndroid]

I think the shading is beautful. And I loved how well-drawn it is. The only bad thing about it, is the face/head looks a bit small and doesn't fit with the rest of the body (which makes the neck look hella wide). Otherwise everything is beautiful.

[ZOMBIE.]

I love the shading you did. Such a fantastic job! The one thing I don't like about it is the neck. It's really long. But very nice job!