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Not A Candle In The Darkness
Dark's Angel
post Aug 10 2006, 05:17 PM
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These writhing shadows
Dig their hellish claws into me.
Clawing into my wounds.
That haven't healed,
Bleeding profusely beneath me.
As I've lost all hope.

One reminds me of my sister,
All I recieve is retched hate.
The twisted form of her is ghastly,
It shows me what I could've done to stop it.

In this darkened world,
The shadows call.
The spirits hear my unanswered questions.
Torturing me constantantly,
Just leave me alone here.

Nothing shines in the darkness,
There's not a single light.
All I know Is pain and the feel of my blood.
 
 
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BigPappaSmurf
post Aug 13 2006, 02:17 AM
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Gosh, I feel like I just ate barbedwire.
Nice effect.
:)
 

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