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nikkkkki
post Aug 1 2006, 04:14 PM
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take a deep breath, let this song sing
fractions of your life as you check out
and don't be afraid to let it go as you
let this song sing remembrance of now
painless agony as you're half way there
and don't stop when it intensifies in tune
just let it come back, as you fade away
 
 
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RCcola
post Aug 1 2006, 04:18 PM
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where's that from?
 
nikkkkki
post Aug 1 2006, 10:42 PM
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from me.
 
RCcola
post Aug 1 2006, 10:44 PM
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oh wow. i like it. do you just write lyrics, or is there an actual song?
 
nikkkkki
post Aug 1 2006, 11:03 PM
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no, actually, i meant for that to be the title of the poem.
 
*mona lisa*
post Aug 3 2006, 07:40 PM
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The lyrics itself are great. You wrote this yourself, right?
 

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