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A Quiet Life
*Freaky Krazer*
post Jul 14 2006, 09:50 PM
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A quiet life I led
Just walking the silent road
Eerie and beautiful

I hear the birds sing their sonnets
As their wings blow into a world
A world intoxicated with serenity

I lived a quiet life
Just glancing through images
Filling their empty voids with elegance

I have the world to myself
The vicinity embracing me with glory
Flourished with the glamour of peace

Oh what a beautiful and quiet life
Every passing second seen with nostalgia
Fragrant with the flowers entangled in day

Each frame lined with a sun-lit glow
Just walking this quiet road
Where I wake from a wonderous slumber
Waking to a quiet life
 
 
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angelrevelation
post Jul 14 2006, 11:20 PM
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You can't keep running from what you're trying to find.
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this is nice. thumbsup.gif some parts of it sound a lot like bright eyes, for some reason. maybe it's just me.
 
Tribal J_Rome
post Jul 15 2006, 02:53 AM
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wut wut in the butt?
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Seems really peaceful. I like it Yen!
 
*Freaky Krazer*
post Jul 15 2006, 12:51 PM
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^thanks Jman
QUOTE(angel_revelation @ Jul 15 2006, 12:20 AM) *
this is nice. thumbsup.gif some parts of it sound a lot like bright eyes, for some reason. maybe it's just me.

maybe the line, "I hear the birds sing their sonnets" through you off to thinking it sounds like Bright Eyes
 
fagget
post Jul 16 2006, 08:40 AM
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i'll fvck you til you luv me fagget
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I liked it a lot.
Made me feel, um, calm. I don't know how to explain it. :[
 

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