I love you..., <3 |
 Jul 5 2006, 03:39 PM
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 Senior Member  Group: Member Posts: 2,614 Joined: Jan 2005 Member No: 85,903  |
Looking over pictures of you in my head
I'm trying so hard to understand Thinking that this will was always going last But it scares me to think of the past It's just what you do to me that makes me this way I hope you understand this some day I really have nothing else that I can say But I love you.. |
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Jul 6 2006, 08:23 PM
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 daughter of sin Group: Member Posts: 1,653 Joined: Mar 2006 Member No: 386,134 |
It's cute, and the idea is good.. I always tell people this: stop rhyming. Find freedom in your writing and explore new things, new words/phrases.. Don't let rhyming phrame your creativity.
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Jul 7 2006, 09:35 AM
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 ...who created this mess...? Group: Member Posts: 451 Joined: Feb 2005 Member No: 97,244 |
This poem is so sweet. ^ Like she said, the idea is very nice.
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Jul 7 2006, 12:01 PM
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POWAPOSTA Group: Member Posts: 3,169 Joined: Jul 2004 Member No: 30,725 |
thx, i love you too
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Jul 16 2006, 10:26 AM
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Senior Member Group: Member Posts: 2,614 Joined: Jan 2005 Member No: 85,903 |
-_-
QUOTE(xblueradiance @ Jul 7 2006, 10:35 AM)  This poem is so sweet. ^ Like she said, the idea is very nice. 
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