"oddysey" |
 May 23 2004, 09:29 PM
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 LunchboxXx  Group: Member Posts: 1,789 Joined: May 2004 Member No: 16,810  |
as the stars beam light onto the optic lense of mine
i peer across the plane to where the roses grow divine. twards the sun they spurt. feasting on morning dew they resemble me as i grow fond to you drawing closer in persuit of your epiphany i would sail in dreadful waters without cavelry the signs on this oddysey warning me :wrong way! but this heart of mine can't help it. i must disobey. i just threw that together in a few minutes. how am i? |
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| *Kathleen* |
May 24 2004, 10:57 AM
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persuit - pursuit
cavelry - calvary Other than that, sounds good to me, Lunchbox.   I thought you didn't like to read, though.  Did you ever read The Oddesey?
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May 24 2004, 10:59 AM
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Senior Member Group: Member Posts: 1,245 Joined: May 2004 Member No: 17,033 |
it sounds good to me, keep it up lunchbox!
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May 24 2004, 02:10 PM
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LunchboxXx Group: Member Posts: 1,789 Joined: May 2004 Member No: 16,810 |
QUOTE(Kathleen @ May 24 2004, 10:57 AM) persuit - pursuit cavelry - calvary Other than that, sounds good to me, Lunchbox. I thought you didn't like to read, though. Did you ever read The Oddesey?yea i don't get it. i hate reading but i'm a great writer (not speller, though). 
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| *Kathleen* |
May 24 2004, 05:06 PM
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Oddysey* I spelled my own things wrong.
 Eh...yeah, that is quite odd.
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May 24 2004, 06:52 PM
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 Dark Lord of McCandless Group: Member Posts: 2,226 Joined: May 2004 Member No: 16,761 |
QUOTE(Kathleen @ May 24 2004, 10:57 AM) persuit - pursuit cavelry - calvary Other than that, sounds good to me, Lunchbox. I thought you didn't like to read, though. Did you ever read The Oddesey?I think he means cavalry, as in horse soldiers, not calvary, as in Jesus's death. |
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May 25 2004, 04:28 PM
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LunchboxXx Group: Member Posts: 1,789 Joined: May 2004 Member No: 16,810 |
QUOTE(ComradeRed @ May 24 2004, 6:52 PM) I think he means cavalry, as in horse soldiers, not calvary, as in Jesus's death. actually it was, like, the cavalry like little destroyer ships following and circling a big cargo ship. |
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| *Kathleen* |
May 25 2004, 06:40 PM
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QUOTE I think he means cavalry, as in horse soldiers, not calvary, as in Jesus's death. Either way, isn't it spelled "calvary"?
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May 25 2004, 06:41 PM
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Dark Lord of McCandless Group: Member Posts: 2,226 Joined: May 2004 Member No: 16,761 |
QUOTE(Kathleen @ May 25 2004, 6:40 PM) Either way, isn't it spelled "calvary"? No, it's "Cavalry". Look it up if you don't believe me. |
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May 25 2004, 07:52 PM
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 i'm susan Group: Official Member Posts: 13,875 Joined: Feb 2004 Member No: 5,029 |
hehe yea u spelled some words long, but i guess it was ok... kinda didnt understand some of wat u were saying, but it was ok^^
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