Misguiding Smile, About a friend who took his own life |
| *RockizLife* |
 Jun 23 2006, 11:37 PM
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Rest in Peace, Graham Patrick Johnson I'm sorry... Misguiding Smile You hid it well with that misguiding smile That pain in your mind that stretched a mile We could never begin to conceive We still find it hard to believe What went through your puzzled mind Was your spirit stumbling through such a bind? Smiles to our hearts is your eternal gift One may have given someone else that needed lift I'm sorry we weren't there in your time of need Still puzzled we are why you decided to bleed But you're free now from the bind that consumed you We're left here wishing there was something we could do Nothing we could ever do will ever erase That pull that ridded you from such cold embrace All we can do is smile at the memories shared I know you knew that we all cared It just was not enough to pull your finger away It was not enough to make you stay You hid it so well with that misguiding smile We'll see you soon in a short-lived while While we wait keep a smile upon God's face Like the one across our hearts you always seemed to trace © Brenden Noll |
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Jun 25 2006, 07:37 PM
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 Mrs. Delonge  Group: Member Posts: 426 Joined: May 2006 Member No: 406,185 |
Aww that's so sad
 Very well written poem 
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Jun 25 2006, 07:42 PM
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 lx Group: Member Posts: 300 Joined: Aug 2004 Member No: 43,440 |
very good poem, lots of emotion.
but why is it adjusted on right? it makes it kind of hard to read... |
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| *RockizLife* |
Jun 25 2006, 10:03 PM
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^ I thought I'd look nicer, but fix it for you. :D
Thanks for the input everyone. Glad you all like it. |
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