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The past I once new so well.
oXMuhNirvanaXo
post Jun 14 2006, 12:15 PM
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Days go by with out me seeing you.
My heart grows weak and grows in fear.
Im trying to hold on threw this short time but its just to hard.
Now looking for you in the back of my mind.
Anything of you at all.
Anything that would set me away from my depression.
Away from my fear.
Anything to get me away from the place that I am right now.
My mind is playing tricks on me.
Now that I have found a memory to remember.
I just dont want to remember anything at all anymore.
It hurts to much..
To remember.
Just to remember
The past that I once knew so well.


What do you think?
 
 
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x2xmhpm
post Jun 14 2006, 05:14 PM
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wow..this was amazing..i can totally relate to this..and thats probably the reason why i love it soo much!!..you did good here..just about a mispelled word or so...
 
AngelinaTaylor
post Jun 14 2006, 06:43 PM
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Good idea, but way too many clichés.

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post Jun 16 2006, 01:19 PM
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Yeah my spelling sucks -_-
 

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