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 May 29 2006, 04:25 PM
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The future is frozen
In the palm of my hand It sheds the light of regret From my disembodied voice I beseech the remains of wisdom to guide my blind eyes My strength wanes as winter passes by My heart withers like a rose wilting through time The land barren and frigid As I await for the soil To be affluent once more The whispers of death belittles my existence As each creature dies of hunger I lose every fragment of hope I had left My skin, now as white as snow Lost the last few shards of meaning A definition hidden in a a world of forget The nocturne of nothingness falls upon me My body emulating the color of death Doting life to leave me What have I done to deserve this? To live in a frozen wasteland With my days numbered by the world All I want is an end for this eternal winter |
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May 29 2006, 05:09 PM
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 I love Havasupai  Group: Member Posts: 1,040 Joined: Jul 2005 Member No: 163,878 |
Who needs T.S. Eliot when Yen is around?
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May 29 2006, 05:10 PM
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Aw thanks Bill ^_^ Who's TS elliot?
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May 29 2006, 08:41 PM
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 Don't wake ghostie. Group: Official Member Posts: 3,546 Joined: Jan 2004 Member No: 2,405 |
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Jun 8 2006, 02:43 PM
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SOS Brigade!! Group: Member Posts: 2,573 Joined: Sep 2004 Member No: 47,775 |
One of the most famous poets Yen HAHAHA and lovely poem!!
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Jun 8 2006, 04:51 PM
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 peace&love, earth flower Group: Member Posts: 651 Joined: Apr 2006 Member No: 398,938 |
Nice poem...a bit sad...but nice.
I feel like that soemtimes, but only for about a second. It goes as fast as it comes... |
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Jun 9 2006, 05:23 AM
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I like it, Yen.
I can relate. But I guess that's because I've got my own interpretations for the poem. :I |
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Jun 9 2006, 08:44 PM
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Senior Member Group: Official Member Posts: 3,459 Joined: Dec 2005 Member No: 328,021 |
Yen, that's a beautiful (I don't know how it fits, but "beautiful" is quite the right word) poem. A bit sad, but I can sort of relate.
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Jun 14 2006, 12:07 PM
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 Senior Member Group: Member Posts: 2,614 Joined: Jan 2005 Member No: 85,903 |
Yen, Your writingt is just so Rad.. <3 you much.. And i must say the title of this is pritty rad also.
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Jun 15 2006, 09:49 PM
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 My name's Katt. Nice to meet you! Group: Member Posts: 3,826 Joined: Jan 2005 Member No: 93,674 |
QUOTE What have I done to deserve this? To live in a frozen wasteland With my days numbered by the world All I want is an end for this eternal winter I love that stanza. Amazing poem. I love the word choice and everything. Chilling and deep. Beautiful!! |
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