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| *Kathleen* |
 May 21 2004, 08:13 PM
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With All My Heart
Cut me open and watch me die because of you I loved you with all my heart and you knew I'll bleed all over you as fast as an epidemic I'll do that so much you'll hate living - you'll regret it Tear me open and watch my heart beat for you Listen, listen close because every breath is true Racing through your mind evil and dark I'll never stop, until I know I've made my mark Paying for the crime you committed (and will probably do more) I do them all a favor by making you suffer for My blood is one with you; I'm in your head Don't count on me leaving until you are dead Rip my heart out and leave it for the world to see I loved you every ounce; it was supposed to be But since you don't feel the same and betray You will rot forever i the depths of Hell to decay No longer attached to something not there, When it's you I see, it's for you I won't care Love is a fragile bond that you viciously ended All because you claim to love another I've befriended |
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May 21 2004, 08:16 PM
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 Dang.. I'd seriously hate to be the person that poem's addressed to  Extremely powerful and well written, very emotional and dark, I love it 
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| *Kathleen* |
May 21 2004, 08:35 PM
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Haha...oh the ex-boyfriend I'll always have a grudge over.
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May 21 2004, 08:38 PM
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QUOTE(Kathleen @ May 21 2004, 9:35 PM) Haha...oh the ex-boyfriend I'll always have a grudge over. Whoo, he's missing some good stuff!  By the way, I like the poem It's poignant. I wish I could write like that... 
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May 22 2004, 12:42 PM
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 Liv's Secret Lover *shhhh* Group: Member Posts: 201 Joined: Apr 2004 Member No: 14,229 |
Wow
 ! Every new poem of yours I read, the more impressed I get! 
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May 25 2004, 09:39 PM
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Senior Member Group: Member Posts: 521 Joined: Apr 2004 Member No: 12,812 |
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wow. that's some pretty good stuff. good talent ((=
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| *Kathleen* |
May 26 2004, 08:55 PM
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Aww thanks, shortie.
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May 28 2004, 01:13 PM
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questions make me blue. Group: Member Posts: 2,608 Joined: Feb 2004 Member No: 3,796 |
it sounds like a song...or it could be made into a song..
 and it would have all these dark sounds..  kathleen is sooooooo cool!
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| *Kathleen* |
May 28 2004, 07:21 PM
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Actually, I did write it to music...hehe...I didn't think anyone would notice.
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May 28 2004, 09:14 PM
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questions make me blue. Group: Member Posts: 2,608 Joined: Feb 2004 Member No: 3,796 |
QUOTE(Kathleen @ May 28 2004, 7:21 PM) Actually, I did write it to music...hehe...I didn't think anyone would notice. hahaha! you thought you could OUTSMART me..? silly rabbit..
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May 29 2004, 07:21 PM
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 Look its... Group: Official Member Posts: 5,817 Joined: Feb 2004 Member No: 4,767 |
wow that poem seems very strong i feel it!!! love it
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Jun 16 2004, 03:41 PM
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 ::destroy ure tv:: Group: Member Posts: 149 Joined: Jun 2004 Member No: 22,005 |
whoa. anger laced with blood and vengeance, and no holding back. talk abt a poem with a blood hazed attached.
nice. i knew u could write...
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| *Kathleen* |
Jun 17 2004, 01:03 PM
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QUOTE whoa. anger laced with blood and vengeance, and no holding back. talk abt a poem with a blood hazed attached. nice. i knew u could write...  Thanks.  Oh haha I know I can write better than this. I wrote this a few years ago when my vocabulary was quite small.
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Jun 17 2004, 02:10 PM
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 dance starrie dance! Group: Member Posts: 205 Joined: Jun 2004 Member No: 20,294 |
wow, thats a really great poem. it would make the person feel all bad... and regretful.. if u gave it to me i would die of shock
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| *Kathleen* |
Jun 17 2004, 04:07 PM
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Haha I don't think he's the type of person to feel bad after someone gave him a poem like that. Heck, I could probably pin it to his forhead, and he still wouldn't get it.
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Jun 20 2004, 04:26 AM
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Very powerful. I love the last line and the statement it made.
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