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| *Kathleen* |
 May 21 2004, 06:15 PM
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Haha pathetic...I wrote this a long time ago.
--------------------------------------------------- There she sits, all alone No one to talk to; no one knows Jocks tease her, pull her hair Cheerleaders just like to stare She drops her books right there To no surprise, no one cares Never has spoken a word Freak, reject, loser; they call her "The Nerd" Confined in her own world, she lays They've kept her buried alive all these days No one heard the screams or the yelps Absolutely no one heard her shrieks for help She stares up at the ceiling as she fears They're shouting, fighting; coming near Pain wells inside of her She knew who they were Same, boring, ordinary day The jocks see her and come out to play She's been waiting for this in years Her heart beats faster as they drew near Tick-tock-tick-tock is what's ahead Laughing, squealing like pigs, she smiles She looks up, one last thing she sees are stone tiles She rips open her jacket to find The very reason they say she was out of her mind |
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May 21 2004, 06:31 PM
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Its a good poem.. too many ppl undervalue their talents these days.. if you consider that pathetic, then I'd love to read what you consider good
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| *Kathleen* |
May 21 2004, 06:43 PM
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Hehe aww thanks!
 I meant bad as in the words are third-grade rhymes. Heh.
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May 21 2004, 09:26 PM
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 3,565, you n00bs ain't got nothin' on me. Group: Official Member Posts: 3,761 Joined: Feb 2004 Member No: 3,565 |
I...don't...get...the...last...stanza....
 But I love how it rhymed and was so full of depth at the same time. |
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May 22 2004, 12:37 PM
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 Liv's Secret Lover *shhhh* Group: Member Posts: 201 Joined: Apr 2004 Member No: 14,229 |
Aww
 That's really good, Kath!!!!
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Jun 16 2004, 04:02 PM
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 ::destroy ure tv:: Group: Member Posts: 149 Joined: Jun 2004 Member No: 22,005 |
whoa! did she blow 'em away? kamikaze style? again i see a clip in my head. maybe i should start directing, and u become my scriptwriter. and my girlfri-- i mean co-director! yea help me uh...direct. eheh.
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| *Kathleen* |
Jun 17 2004, 01:09 PM
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QUOTE whoa! did she blow 'em away? kamikaze style? again i see a clip in my head. maybe i should start directing, and u become my scriptwriter. and my girlfri-- i mean co-director! yea help me uh...direct. eheh. Yep she did. Really? Woo. I didn't know they were that descriptive. Thank you.
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Jun 17 2004, 02:13 PM
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 dance starrie dance! Group: Member Posts: 205 Joined: Jun 2004 Member No: 20,294 |
wow! LOVED the rhymes
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Jun 20 2004, 04:28 AM
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 Senior Member Group: Member Posts: 3,077 Joined: Feb 2004 Member No: 3,904 |
Reminds me of freshman year...
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Jun 20 2004, 04:37 AM
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Aww.. that was cool.
Except.. I don't get the last stanza either.. Explain please? I wanna know the ending x_x |
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| *Kathleen* |
Jun 20 2004, 06:31 PM
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QUOTE Except.. I don't get the last stanza either.. Explain please? I wanna know the ending x_x QUOTE whoa! did she blow 'em away? kamikaze style?  There you go, Eve.
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Jun 20 2004, 08:06 PM
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 kristin Group: Member Posts: 5,705 Joined: Feb 2004 Member No: 3,985 |
thats really good, and it's something a lot of people can relate to, including me
 but its a really good poem..nice job
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