4 poems, written when I'm halfasleep. |
 May 21 2004, 02:28 PM
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 pixel hybrid  Group: Member Posts: 6,410 Joined: Jan 2004 Member No: 1,081  |
Poem 1: Birds
Birds are really cool. They lay white oval shapped eggs Birds are awesome..yeah. Poem 2: Would you like to hear my poem? Ready? Ready? Are you sure you're ready? Come on, you ready? Ready? Ready? Are you ready? Okay, you're ready? [end.] Poem 3: E There was a tree. It was friends with me. But then it had to pee. Oh wee. Wee! What the hell am I talking about?! Poem 4: Poptarts Oh poptart! Oh poptart! I want poptarts in a cart. Oh poptart! Oh poptart! You will stay in my heart and I am sorry that you are yummy and that you should belong in my tummy but... BURN IN THE TOASTER! |
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May 21 2004, 03:34 PM
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 3,565, you n00bs ain't got nothin' on me. Group: Official Member Posts: 3,761 Joined: Feb 2004 Member No: 3,565 |
Those sound so hyper.
Another reason for me to love it. 
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| *Kathleen* |
May 21 2004, 07:36 PM
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Haha. I love them.
 You showed me them before!
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May 29 2004, 07:29 PM
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 Look its... Group: Official Member Posts: 5,817 Joined: Feb 2004 Member No: 4,767 |
wow those are original lol. cool =)
i love this one the most QUOTE Ready?
Ready? Are you sure you're ready? Come on, you ready? Ready? Ready? Are you ready? Okay, you're ready? [end.] |
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| *CEP* |
May 29 2004, 07:46 PM
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Here's a flower for each one, Kim:
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May 31 2004, 02:56 PM
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 wanderlust personified. Group: Official Designer Posts: 7,515 Joined: Jan 2004 Member No: 797 |
Haha, those are great. *applause*
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Jun 3 2004, 09:30 PM
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Senior Member Group: Member Posts: 214 Joined: Apr 2004 Member No: 14,404 |
NOICE NOICE NOICE
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Jun 5 2004, 07:34 AM
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 The red or the blue Group: Member Posts: 294 Joined: Jun 2004 Member No: 19,976 |
They were funny, in a man that's so stupid, kind of way. Though they don't really rival my friend's poems. I might put an example up sometime, though he'd probably kill me.
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Jun 5 2004, 12:46 PM
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 Live Your Own Party Group: Member Posts: 1,261 Joined: Mar 2004 Member No: 7,489 |
lol. that's the kind of poetry i usually hate, but this time i just thought it was hilarious!!! i was cracking up. aspecialy with the pop-tart one.
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Jun 5 2004, 12:47 PM
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 durian Group: Staff Alumni Posts: 13,124 Joined: Feb 2004 Member No: 3,860 |
ahhas Kim! OMG that was awesome! Omg that poptart one! You should make a song of that..
 You could make a jingle... awesome =D You're so silly =D
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