The Someone Just For Me |
 May 21 2006, 08:32 PM
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Newbie  Group: Member Posts: 1 Joined: May 2006 Member No: 410,563  |
hey ppl tell me what you think of this Poem.....
This city has no people... But... The light burning in the homes... Is warm and bright. I am in a city with no people... But I'm not sad or lonely. My heart glows. I am one of them, but I still feel warm inside. That's because I love this person. The heart of someone who's... In love... Whether that person is alive or not... Is kind and warm. If my heart is this warm... If I can be this happy... Then I wish that all those like me can fall in love... And that all of them will have their love returned. The love we feel may not be the same... But it doesn't matter when I'm with the someone just for me. If we can all find that special person.. Then the world will be a most joyous place. Then... This city... Will have no unhappy people. It's the special city that has... The someone just for me. |
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May 21 2006, 08:39 PM
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 <3 Group: Member Posts: 3,657 Joined: Nov 2004 Member No: 64,493 |
this should be in Writing
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| *This Confession* |
May 21 2006, 08:44 PM
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^yes
someone move this |
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May 21 2006, 09:48 PM
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 dakishimetainoni... Group: Staff Alumni Posts: 4,322 Joined: Dec 2004 Member No: 75,318 |
I hope you're not going to claim that as your own because I recognize that from Chobits.
I  Chobits.Moved to Writing. |
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Jun 3 2006, 01:56 AM
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 You can't keep running from what you're trying to find. Group: Official Member Posts: 5,030 Joined: Oct 2004 Member No: 54,096 |
^ yea that's what i was thinking... but i don't know if it was the exact things said in chobits, or if it was just inspired by it
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Jun 10 2006, 09:04 PM
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 daughter of sin Group: Member Posts: 1,653 Joined: Mar 2006 Member No: 386,134 |
It's great, but it's not yours :)
Taylor`` |
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