A song I wrote |
 May 18 2006, 09:51 PM
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@ngel_Lynn  Group: Member Posts: 158 Joined: Aug 2005 Member No: 205,612  |
Honestly guys/ gurls I wrote this song
Remember me… By: Angel Remember Always keep insight of your inner faith, Your hopes, Your dreams, Even though life may have curves, Twists, And, you feel that you are the only one, But, remember that no one is perfect And you can’t run through life through the cracks, The slopes, Remember us. (Chorus) I will watch over you Being by your side Being there to protect you I will help you Be your guide All ways shall I be there by your side And I’ll help you be strong And I’ll sing you songs Even though you cant see me eye to eye I’ll be there watching protecting Through by and by Just as long as you promise me You’ll remember me (End of chorus) “I know I wasn’t perfect, I made mistakes Please forgive me, I’m sorry how I made some remakes, Of my deals before, Just know as you pass, Walk by, Out of my life, Right through that door, Remember us. Remember us.” (Chorus) I will watch over you Being by your side Being there to protect you I will help you Be your guide All ways shall I be there by your side And I’ll help you be strong And I’ll sing you songs Even though you cant see me eye to eye I’ll be there watching protecting Through by and by Just as long as you promise me You’ll remember me (end of chorus) “I know I wasn’t perfect, I made mistakes Please forgive me, I’m sorry how I made some remakes, Of my deals before,” And maybe next time you will be able to trust, Trust me, Please be able to listen Please, Please, Please, but as I see you pass Walk out of my life, Know that this, What happens with this blade, This knife, That I hope you’ll forgive me. “Even though you cant see me eye to eye I’ll be there watching protecting Through by and by Just as long as you promise me You’ll remember me” Do not deprave, But never forget me, Remember me… Remember me… (Me fades out) |
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May 26 2006, 01:05 AM
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 Hello There. Group: Member Posts: 1,572 Joined: Jan 2005 Member No: 88,673 |
This is an AWESOME song.
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May 26 2006, 12:09 PM
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 Jake - The Unholy Trinity / Premiscuous Poeteer. Group: Member Posts: 1,272 Joined: May 2006 Member No: 411,316 |
That's a big chorus. Have you put music to it yet? That's going to sound dope, son.
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May 28 2006, 01:54 PM
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 [t u m a d r e] Group: Member Posts: 25 Joined: May 2006 Member No: 413,529 |
aww! that's so awesome!
it sounds like something my PE teacher would preach about... or one of her musician friends. you have talent for writing. keep writing! |
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