Confined., Just read it. feedback is welcomed. Options

[Terror]

I felt like writing something, so I wrote this little poem. Enjoy.

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Through the ashes and rubble of this desecrated union
I crawl on hands and knees, scouring to find a part of me to salvage
I realize the obvious:
This is what I'm reduced to, ruins.
Rubble and Ashes.
Scattered as each day passes.
There is nothing left.
Come down off your cloud, realize what you've done.
Look over your shoulder, and see the trail of tears you leave
If I could feel my arms, I'd rip my eyeballs out.
Just to remove these relentless images of his lips and yours.
Locked in a deep embrace.
His face is tatooed unto the back of my eyelids, forever.
Your deception is engraved in my mind, forever.
And forever always, will I shut you out.
Now, I am chained to this ruined Earth.
Lashed to the verge of death by these visions of you, without me.
The walls are closing in.
Hurry
Shackled by my insecurities, and chained by your lies.
You have the Key.
Release me from this prison that you created.
I'm begging you.

[lil_blue04]

Wow, I really like this poem. My fave part is definately the beginning
("I crawl on hands and knees, scouring to find a part of me to salvage
I realize the obvious:
This is what I'm reduced to, ruins"). May I ask, what inspired you to write this poem?