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 May 9 2006, 09:04 PM
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 who ma bitch? you ma bitch, bitch.  Group: Member Posts: 1,920 Joined: Oct 2004 Member No: 55,278  |
Ok i tried to make collage but it came out crappy
 at least i think it did...here it is  Btw it is my first Collage ever  c & c please i really need help with this one. like on how i could improve it. or if it has to many things. or if it's just crap and i should just forget about coding it and never try making a collage again? yeah...*shutting up now* |
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May 9 2006, 09:11 PM
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 What's my name? Janette. and ily. <3 Group: Member Posts: 2,139 Joined: Apr 2006 Member No: 391,911 |
Wow...me likee! I'm tempted to ask you if I could use that for a layout...but I'm scared to be rejected
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May 9 2006, 09:19 PM
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who ma bitch? you ma bitch, bitch. Group: Member Posts: 1,920 Joined: Oct 2004 Member No: 55,278 |
^you like it??
wow  i could make you one if you want... |
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May 9 2006, 11:05 PM
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 Peggy. Group: Member Posts: 2,508 Joined: Aug 2005 Member No: 214,025 |
It's really good. The only suggestion is to make the text at least a bit more stand out? I'd rather want some other color background for "DestinyxAngel" and "Fun in the Sun" would stand out more.
Good job! It will be a good layout. |
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May 9 2006, 11:10 PM
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i would love to see it on a layout..
but i have one problem with it and its the only one i see is where you outlined one of the pictures in white.. i don't like how it cuts off another picture of the girl's head.. and the red thing in the top right corner bothers me but thats it really i think it looks really good and you should code it and put it in a layout good luck 
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May 9 2006, 11:29 PM
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who ma bitch? you ma bitch, bitch. Group: Member Posts: 1,920 Joined: Oct 2004 Member No: 55,278 |
i already coded it...sort of
Click here for preview im still working a lot on it. i dont like how it looks... AHH ill fix it later. me too sleepy to do anything else 
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May 9 2006, 11:37 PM
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 I intend to live forever-so far, so good. Group: Member Posts: 2,820 Joined: Mar 2005 Member No: 115,137 |
I think the cutoffs arent her fault. I was going to use those pictures in a blend, but the cropping on them was crazy so I decided not too =P I think the layout rocks! the collage is just plain beautiful. Nice job! haha
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May 9 2006, 11:40 PM
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who ma bitch? you ma bitch, bitch. Group: Member Posts: 1,920 Joined: Oct 2004 Member No: 55,278 |
^^^ yes the cropping is crazy!! i was originally going to do a blend as well but this came out...sort of easier i guess. it took me about 3 hours since it was my first collage :pinch
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May 10 2006, 12:07 AM
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 the name is ada. Group: Official Member Posts: 4,688 Joined: Dec 2005 Member No: 334,608 |
That looks awesome.Nice images and choice of font.
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May 10 2006, 01:02 AM
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 Milo Kamalani Group: Human Posts: 954 Joined: Oct 2005 Member No: 274,798 |
The colors are so neat and vibrant, where did you get the images?
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May 10 2006, 07:56 AM
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 Bada-bing, bada-boom. Group: Member Posts: 452 Joined: Jan 2005 Member No: 86,111 |
Yay it's a layout! It's beautiful, and I love the pictures you chose. "Fun in the Sun" could stand out a tad more, but other than that, no critique.
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May 10 2006, 11:31 AM
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who ma bitch? you ma bitch, bitch. Group: Member Posts: 1,920 Joined: Oct 2004 Member No: 55,278 |
QUOTE(Stephire @ May 9 2006, 11:02 PM)  The colors are so neat and vibrant, where did you get the images? ummm. i got them at foto decadent<---  that site.  and thank you all for the comments |
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May 10 2006, 11:52 AM
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 Senior Member Group: Member Posts: 124 Joined: Feb 2006 Member No: 370,115 |
ohh this is one of my favorite photoshoots. the colors are really nifty. & you did a great job for your first collage. |
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May 10 2006, 12:21 PM
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the layout is good i think
although i think centering the font and stuff in the middle of the images on the top and bottom would make it look good as well.. hmm the picture over in the bottom right corner is a little odd and comes out of no where but really i think its good
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May 10 2006, 02:34 PM
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I like it alot, it would make a cute layout.
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May 10 2006, 02:44 PM
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 Senior Member Group: Member Posts: 3,055 Joined: Jul 2005 Member No: 174,796 |
I don't know a lot about collages, but this is AWESOME
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May 10 2006, 03:30 PM
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who ma bitch? you ma bitch, bitch. Group: Member Posts: 1,920 Joined: Oct 2004 Member No: 55,278 |
thank you all!!
im going to make more collages now 
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May 10 2006, 03:37 PM
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 Senior Member Group: Official Member Posts: 7,149 Joined: Aug 2005 Member No: 213,509 |
hehe you should. this is awesome, great them and choice of images, nice colors and the use of your brushes. this is great.
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