Two Lonely Souls |
Two Lonely Souls |
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![]() Koorime ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Member Posts: 153 Joined: Sep 2005 Member No: 237,135 ![]() |
Drowning in my misery,
I sit soaked, in the rain Looking up at the sky With sad eyes full of pain, I don't think I'm feeling anything But pain, sadness, and loneliness My heart's so cold and empty In my reverie, A jet black raven lands On my shoulder. It's sad caw hits me Right to the bone. I wish that I Could comfort it somehow. Because it seems like it's In the same position as me. Being terribly lonely, The outcast of society, And just wanting to belong somewhere. Where can our souls find solace? Where can we find peace? I wonder this as I Look out into the pouring rain. Sheltering him, I felt my heart soften somewhat. My eyes water and my head bows down The rain stops slowly, And the raven caws gently to me. He seems a little more content now. He's not alone, And neither am I. We have each other. |
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![]() _ ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Member Posts: 520 Joined: Feb 2005 Member No: 107,274 ![]() |
Another piece with wonderful imagery. Obsession with the rain or am I just pulling out words I want to see?
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![]() I love Havasupai ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Member Posts: 1,040 Joined: Jul 2005 Member No: 163,878 ![]() |
Bravo! Ode to the Raven?
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![]() Koorime ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Member Posts: 153 Joined: Sep 2005 Member No: 237,135 ![]() |
I love sitting in the rain and just think...Its somewhat and ode to The Raven because when i wrote it, I briefly thought about it....
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![]() Senior Member ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Member Posts: 2,614 Joined: Jan 2005 Member No: 85,903 ![]() |
I also love sitting in the rain also. Cant wait to look at more stuff you have wrote. :-)
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