Stormy Horrors |
 May 2 2006, 04:53 PM
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 Koorime  Group: Member Posts: 153 Joined: Sep 2005 Member No: 237,135  |
Lighning crashes overhead
My heart pounds with anticipation My head spins And I gasp as the room Suddenly goes dark The trees sway violently and the branches scratch the windows My heart almost stops as I hear a terrible moan of pain I freeze and I'm immobile I don't know what to do The storm clashes around me And this makes it Even worse for me My curiosity is roused But I am scared stiff at the same time The lights flicker And I find the will to move a bit My hand moves to the door And opens it slowly I cry out in terror As I see what I didn't expect The words that looked To be written in blood I'm sorry love, I couldn't take it anymore. |
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May 5 2006, 11:22 AM
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 I love Havasupai Group: Member Posts: 1,040 Joined: Jul 2005 Member No: 163,878 |
Holy crap! This gave me goosebumps! It builds much like Poe's work does. Again, well done! Your ability to write about the fraility of the human psyche is hauntingly beautiful!
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May 5 2006, 11:59 AM
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Koorime Group: Member Posts: 153 Joined: Sep 2005 Member No: 237,135 |
Lol. I love Poe's works! ^^ I was going for the effect at the end and I'm pretty glad the way it turned out.
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