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 Mar 23 2006, 01:12 PM
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Member  Group: Member Posts: 26 Joined: Oct 2005 Member No: 279,677  |
i purposely didnt do to many layers cus i saw a vector that was XTREMELY simplified and i loved it
ps. basically ignore the background im just tryin to improve my skills on the actual subject heres my newest one.. ..........................vector................................................ ..........................original..................   personally i like it but i do think its a little choppy still and theres sumthi nabout the face that i dont like... |
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Mar 23 2006, 01:19 PM
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It's nice and simple! I think there needs to be another layer on the neck though. It's not exactly one color in the shaded areas. Also maybe some details in the hair and eyebrows might be good too. I like how you did the eyeshadow though! Great job ^^
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Mar 23 2006, 07:01 PM
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 I intend to live forever-so far, so good. Group: Member Posts: 2,820 Joined: Mar 2005 Member No: 115,137 |
its actually very smooth
 not choppy haha its really good. i like the simplicity of it and how you have the shadow on her face. yes maybe more shadows for the next would be good but thats ok. your improving well, keep it up! =)
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Mar 23 2006, 08:38 PM
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Member Group: Member Posts: 26 Joined: Oct 2005 Member No: 279,677 |
ok so im praticing sum more and instead of doin a picture i created a persn here it is...
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Mar 23 2006, 08:56 PM
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^^ that one is awesome.
The simplicity is nice! Smooth and clean. |
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Mar 23 2006, 09:14 PM
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 the name is ada. Group: Official Member Posts: 4,688 Joined: Dec 2005 Member No: 334,608 |
I ike the 2nd most.It looks really good.
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Mar 24 2006, 07:56 AM
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 Milo Kamalani Group: Human Posts: 954 Joined: Oct 2005 Member No: 274,798 |
The second one is really good, everything about it looks really nice.
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Mar 24 2006, 04:10 PM
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 Senior Member Group: Member Posts: 3,055 Joined: Jul 2005 Member No: 174,796 |
Everything looks pretty good for a beginner just be more detailed.
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Mar 24 2006, 04:35 PM
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Member Group: Member Posts: 26 Joined: Oct 2005 Member No: 279,677 |
so heres my most recent
im working my way up as far as layers go... every one i do has more layers than the last but im still having trouble with eyebrows i cant seem to get them right so i leave them solid 
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Mar 24 2006, 05:24 PM
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 Senior Member Group: Official Member Posts: 7,149 Joined: Aug 2005 Member No: 213,509 |
this one is great, maybe add more layers to the skin.great job though and nice colors and nice job on the hair, youre getting better
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Mar 24 2006, 08:03 PM
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i like the last one you posted, yes - vectors go well smooth as possible. but your vexels are getting to be better!
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Mar 24 2006, 11:23 PM
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Member Group: Member Posts: 26 Joined: Oct 2005 Member No: 279,677 |
im just gonna keep updateing this post with my newest efforts until i get good
so heres a simplified thingy i did 
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Mar 25 2006, 12:19 AM
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 My name is really Matt... if you care. Group: Member Posts: 1,442 Joined: Oct 2005 Member No: 258,234 |
give the hair more detail and it woul be a really good one
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Mar 25 2006, 01:33 AM
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Member Group: Member Posts: 26 Joined: Oct 2005 Member No: 279,677 |
QUOTE(add1cted2f1re @ Mar 25 2006, 4:19 PM)  give the hair more detail and it woul be a really good one i didnt want to put more detail i made it thinking of it as a graphic but either way i didnt want more detail in the hair i liked the solid color. if i put more detail in the hair hte i wud have to put more in the face for continuity. nad i like it (the face) the way it was. |
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