Poetry O Poetry!, by Jessica |
 Mar 22 2006, 10:59 PM
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 who ma bitch? you ma bitch, bitch.  Group: Member Posts: 1,920 Joined: Oct 2004 Member No: 55,278  |
Poetry O Poetry!
Poetry O poetry Why do you torment me? Poetry O poetry I really do hate thee! Rhymes and riddles, similes and metaphors I really do not care! Poetry O poetry Why do I even dare? There is this teacher, this English teacher That gives out essays and work I work and work and work and work’ There really is no perk Do this! Do that! Write this! Write that! Oh I wish I could just hit him with a bat! Poetry O poetry Why do you torment me? Poetry O poetry Is it because you hate me? ------------------------------------- i wrote this poem after my 4 period class, English(god i hate that class!) i was feeling very mad against poetry because i didn't understand it the way this teacher was teaching it i felt so confused and frustrated  ....
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| *Phoenixx* |
Mar 22 2006, 11:24 PM
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Hahahaha, I love that you write poetry about hating poetry. That's clever & made me laugh. =]
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Mar 23 2006, 12:19 AM
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 Senior Member Group: Member Posts: 1,584 Joined: Dec 2004 Member No: 70,748 |
haha i like it...is it from walt whitmans O! captain my captain? its very shakespearey...like what im doing in class now
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Mar 23 2006, 12:36 AM
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who ma bitch? you ma bitch, bitch. Group: Member Posts: 1,920 Joined: Oct 2004 Member No: 55,278 |
^ um... no?
i dont actually understand what your saying and i've never had thechance to read that poem. ive been wanting to but im just to busy 
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Mar 23 2006, 12:47 AM
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 fell in love with a boy Group: Member Posts: 523 Joined: May 2004 Member No: 16,965 |
QUOTE(CUTEBUNNY160 @ Mar 23 2006, 1:36 AM)  ^ um... no? i dont actually understand what your saying and i've never had thechance to read that poem. ive been wanting to but im just to busy now i understand what my book meant when it said how can you practice your craft if you dont know it. we all need to read the elders poetry.. me especially. i liked the idea behind your poem. but to be honest, i didnt like it itself. keep writing though. keep posting it here. tread on lindsey |
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Mar 23 2006, 11:04 PM
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victim of myspace.com Group: Member Posts: 395 Joined: Mar 2006 Member No: 386,435 |
I liked it a lot =D
Sorry, I'm just not feeling very, uh.....................................wordy?? |
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