Beloved Mother, By Jessica |
 Mar 22 2006, 08:00 PM
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 who ma bitch? you ma bitch, bitch.  Group: Member Posts: 1,920 Joined: Oct 2004 Member No: 55,278  |
Beloved Mother
The image of my mother My greatest love A love compared to no other Always brought us closer together She is my beloved woman My mother The beauty in your eyes I could never forget From the skies An angel fell Very much loved and respected And even though times are cruel I will always have you in my heart Not even death can separate us My love for you will always go on She said to me than in life We have to try our hardest She showed me the way to the right path My dream is to love her for an eternity And to go back to the time I was a little boy And to love and be loved by her again |
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Mar 22 2006, 08:15 PM
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victim of myspace.com Group: Member Posts: 395 Joined: Mar 2006 Member No: 386,435 |
Omg...is this a true story???
Well...writing-wise, its another very-well written poem. Like I told you, I'm a huge fan! |
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Mar 22 2006, 08:40 PM
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who ma bitch? you ma bitch, bitch. Group: Member Posts: 1,920 Joined: Oct 2004 Member No: 55,278 |
nah it isn't true
i just though the story up  and thank you for the lovely compliment 
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Mar 22 2006, 08:56 PM
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victim of myspace.com Group: Member Posts: 395 Joined: Mar 2006 Member No: 386,435 |
Oh, OKAY GOOD!
I wanted to cry!  Have you noticed people get very emotional from your poems? (Good thing) |
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Mar 22 2006, 09:52 PM
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who ma bitch? you ma bitch, bitch. Group: Member Posts: 1,920 Joined: Oct 2004 Member No: 55,278 |
^ thank you
but i don't get it my poems seem crappy to me 
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Mar 22 2006, 10:25 PM
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victim of myspace.com Group: Member Posts: 395 Joined: Mar 2006 Member No: 386,435 |
Come on`, be more confident in yourself!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Mar 22 2006, 11:00 PM
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who ma bitch? you ma bitch, bitch. Group: Member Posts: 1,920 Joined: Oct 2004 Member No: 55,278 |
^lol thanks to you i am
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Mar 23 2006, 12:51 AM
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 fell in love with a boy Group: Member Posts: 523 Joined: May 2004 Member No: 16,965 |
I liked it.
Very nice. |
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