Come On China Doll |
| *Phoenixx* |
 Mar 21 2006, 10:56 PM
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I'm (re)new here. A lot of what I say doesn't make sense so just ignore anything you don't get. With that being said..
COME ON, CHINA DOLL. I am (sort of; maybe; just barely) sorry that I am apatheic to your sensivitiy. Your immaturity does not impress me & to be honest it flatters you in the least possible way. So suave, wrapped up in brilliance. Do not lie. You're nothing short of inanity in it's truest form. Left, right, left right we march like soldiers. Don't mess up don't you dare skip a beat. They're all watching you sweat it out knowing you're capable of nothing. They're laughing. How does that make you feel? Come on, china doll! Crack. They play with you then shatter you into a million pieces. You're forgotten. How does that make you feel? Come on, baby. Drop down and surrender. This is all just a little game & we're winning. So just give up just give up, my baby. |
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Mar 22 2006, 06:43 PM
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 <3  Group: Member Posts: 185 Joined: Jan 2006 Member No: 365,309 |
Hello =)
This is art<3 DUH? |
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Mar 22 2006, 07:21 PM
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victim of myspace.com Group: Member Posts: 395 Joined: Mar 2006 Member No: 386,435 |
^^Haha, yes duh.
That was awesome!! But right now I have a feeling I'm reading too much into it..right now I'm like, "The China doll symbolises human life, and all the struggles with it - the struggles with you, others, and your environment." |
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| *Phoenixx* |
Mar 22 2006, 09:29 PM
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Thanks guys!
Ah Ice Cream 4 U (name?!) I love that you read into it like that. It's what I want to happwn. I am just using china doll as symbolism for a girl who breaks easy under pressure and cares about what other people think. But I like how you interpreted it! and Hello! Shes_Out..I'm Jackie what's your nameeee? =] |
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Mar 22 2006, 10:28 PM
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victim of myspace.com Group: Member Posts: 395 Joined: Mar 2006 Member No: 386,435 |
^^Haha yay, I was on a broader subject. Awesomeness. *goes to read poem again*
Yes, I get it now. I like that - its something we can all relate to. And BTW, my name is Sierra. =D |
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Mar 23 2006, 12:17 AM
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 Senior Member Group: Member Posts: 1,584 Joined: Dec 2004 Member No: 70,748 |
i like ur poem and what its message. i think its how im feeling right now =\
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Mar 23 2006, 12:26 AM
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 fell in love with a boy Group: Member Posts: 523 Joined: May 2004 Member No: 16,965 |
this is really good. it reminds me of my "march" but it's got a different idea behind it.
good job. |
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Mar 24 2006, 09:54 PM
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<3 Group: Member Posts: 185 Joined: Jan 2006 Member No: 365,309 |
QUOTE(Phoenixx @ Mar 22 2006, 6:29 PM)  Hello! Shes_Out..I'm Jackie what's your nameeee? =] Hello to you (; Let me be real right now, SAWWWP, I'm Nikki<3 [: |
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Mar 25 2006, 01:15 AM
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 Yawn Group: Staff Alumni Posts: 9,530 Joined: Nov 2004 Member No: 65,772 |
Wow, great job with this!
I wanted to read more! Very interesting...good choice of words too. great work |
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